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| King Steve 2008-06-26 ch 1,  | abuseWow, thats such an intensely sad story, made me want to cry. No wonder John in the future is such a hardass. I love how she learned her expressionless stare from him. I also like the possibility that she's not completely dead - if the CPU's intact its probably more like a coma. I'd love to see another one shot related to this, maybe where he meets her model again in the future and can bring "his" cam back online. Worth a thought I think. |
| necro-wulf 2008-03-27 ch 1, | abuseWow, I wasn't expecting him to salvage her CPU...or a chain gun. I thought you were going to have her core go nova like the 101 in T3, but this was good too. |
| dakota423 2008-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAh! Amazing once again! I absolutely love your writing style, you put the reader into that situation so easily! Another beautiful piece. I've found myself writing a small TSCC one-shot; I might post it eventually. I'd love to hear your thoughts on it when it's up. It's not titled yet, but keep a look-out; it'll be my first Terminator fic. |
| RGSJenkins 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThis story made me cry, it's a perfect ending to a perfect story. |
| Tpolich 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abusevery well done, I really like how he figured out she learned that icy expression was from him. Sad but still really good. |
| Myxale 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was heavy! You really did capture the essence of J-Day and the transformation of the John the Boy into John the leader! Not to mention the hint towards Kyle and Derek. You did it well! The mood and feel of the dreaded day was tangible and i worked well. The last moments between John and Cam were done great! And that he kept her Chip completed the cycle! Kudos. |
| BenRG 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseA nice story that would make a great final scene of the show. John meets his destiny and Cameron meets hers. However, Terminators are tough and maybe, just maybe, there is hope that the dead do not need to /stay/ dead in the future. There is always hope, so long as you keep fighting. 'Bob' and Cam taught him that. BenRG's Rating: 8/10 |