great story

I enjoyed this story, but I think though that it maybe moved a bit too fast. But it had a good story line. Thank you!

Excellent start...can't wait to read more. And no my name does not have anything to do with your comment on flames...though that was one of my ideas behind choosing it four years ago. Flames burn people so what's the point. Resist the flamers. {{JOKE}}

Ok, why does Gary have so many kids?By the way, really good story, but i would have thought that the paper might have stopped after Gary had kids.A bit too much to handle.

Great story. I love the names. Pease finish it as soon as possible.

Cool. I like it! I love the show and this is a great story. Post up the rest soon, I'd like to see what happens next! And uh...cool names! Aussandra sounds like my real name. Kewl!