I was almost immeadietly hooked, particurally since I've heard suggestions that the ship Canderous saw was actually the first of the Yuuzhan Vong. I liked the read, and I would have liked to hear the rest of it, or at least more of what you imagined to have happened. It would be interesting to see how Revan reacted to the Yuzhaan Vong while she was there, particurally considering how badly wounded she came back.

This was pretty good. I was reluctent at first to read it because on of the genres was horror. But this didn't really same like horror to me. Then again, I know little of the Vong, so I might have missed the horror. You should continue this.

Too short! for one thing-if you continue, get more into the feelings of the characters. This felt like an intro only-the IDEA, however about the Vong? Priceless! Yes, I would be interested to read more.