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| Mr. Thumbsup 2008-05-03 ch 1, | abuseOh my God, that's so sad. Please update this! |
| Rose1948 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseWow. Dark. A vengeful Ranma. Scary. |
| FalseExact 2008-04-03 ch 1, | abuseA few errors in the story, but I like the idea behind it. Also, very short, could of been longer. |
| foesjoe 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuse500 words and soo many errors. This really isn't that long, the least you could is get your tenses right. |