A tad confusing, but it seems to promise a bit more explanation in future chapters (if there are any). A very original idea! I really like it! I certainly hope this won't be abandoned. It seems like a very promising plot! I'll be keeping an eye on this.

woah.

this is...
really GOOD.

i hope it hasnt been abandoned.

it hasnt... has it?

PLEASE UPDATE ANYWAY :D


-jolie

This is very awesome and original. I really love it.

This is a great beginning to what looks like a really cool story. There are so many places to go from here and I can't wait to see what happens next! This is the first story I've seen on the site like this so you get major props for coming up with an original idea. I really hope you continue this, please update soon! : )

~Anna