Whoa... that was awesome, not to mention hilarious. Balthier is such a slut - I love it!

Aw, poor Baltheir. Got a man instead of a woman. Pssh.

Haha, Basch swings that way! LAWL -falling over-

But it was an unexpected surprise, even almost unwelcome, although I did enjoy it. Hah!

By the way, I don't really understand the meaning of the last line. Are they going to tell Ashe that her clothes are inappropriate together? Or something, wut? -confused- Or are they going to take it off for her? Heh. I like my fantasies instead of reality moar though.

Haha, Vaan thinks having guns will make him a sky pirate.

I love how Balthier is "Uguh" about the whole Basch making moves on him.

Glad to see you take out a story on FFXII because I love it!

Good job! Hope to read more!

Sorry for not being coherent much, I'm a bit out of it. D8

Adios!

"Vaan, even if you had my admittedly impressive arsenal, you wouldn't have the slightest idea of what to do with it."


BEST LINE EVER!

Wow, I was not expecting that. It was hilarious and very well done. I love your writing style and the way the story turned out, good job!