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nancy 2008-07-29 ch 4, anon.	abuseI really enjoy ur writing style! please don't drop this story. I really love this anime and always will :3 more Kenshin goodness please X3
fuzzywuzzy 2008-07-12 ch 4, anon.	abuseWhy did you stop? I loved this chapter so much! Please update as soon as possible!
moeru himura 2008-04-06 ch 4,	abuseI like this chapter. I wanted it to be longer, though. Maybe you could have explored the relationship bet. Toji and Kenshin more. I love those kinds of interaction.:P I'm still afraid for anyone who comes close to Amaya. TB's highly contageous. For all we know, Kenshin may have already acquired the bacteria. T_T I would have believed it if Toji really kicked them out after she knew. Either she's just very kind or she doesn't know how dangerous the disease is. I also got confused at first at the name Toji. It's usually a guy's name. Anyhow, interesting chapter. What's with the evil-looking man trying to look for Kenshin? If Kenshin left, wouldn't that endanger Toji's family more? Looking forward to the next chapter!:P
RVD 2008-04-06 ch 4,	abuse'Great! Who the hell is chasing after the man with red hair now?! More crazy bastards who wants to try out their newly bought toy or simply think that they should find the Hitokiri for some exchange of swords... Just when everything seems so fine, this has to happen... This could have drove someone to the brink of destruction... Apparently, our good rurouni has just been through destruction and back... Will he step into the gates of destruction again? He might have to think twice with that sick girl on his back...' Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!
Water85 2008-04-05 ch 4,	abuseSuperb chapter! It was really incredible, this one! I love Toji, she's so very real. And her human failings, they're so sad and sweet. I loved it so much. And Amaya's so freaking cute!
Crazy IchiRuki fangirl 2008-04-05 ch 4, anon.	abuseWell my girl, until the last chapter your story was good but ordinary. But this one totally turned things around and now it is a GREAT fic. I adore your outside-perspective of Kenshin, what ordinary people might think of him, that's so hard to write. And I love the way you portray your OCs, they're so fragile, so human that really, just wow. And Amaya is a real little girl now, with temperemant and feelings, not a plastic angelic mary-sue. Great job!
Blunablue 2008-04-05 ch 4,	abusehm, I think the chapter flows very well. It's interesting to see everything through Toji's eyes, an unusual outside-perspective of kenshin - but just with little sentences and Toji's observations you achieved it to make the characters of kenshin and little Amaya very believable and tangible (without any insights - that's not very easy)... expecially the mesmerizing aura of Kenshin you described very, very well! and Toji is an interesting person, too...and you build a tension: who is the stranger, searching for kenshin?
IVIaedhros 2008-04-05 ch 4,	abuseVery good...the chapter may have been hard to write, but the new perspective seems to have worked very well for you. There's a good deal more in the way of details through observation, but they also come completely naturally in that I feel as if I'm actually observing instead of being sat down and read a laundry list of facts.
Water85 2008-03-28 ch 3,	abuseOkay I take back what I said, I really like Amaya- she's so cute! -wails- Great chapter, I'm falling in love with this story now.
Water85 2008-03-28 ch 2,	abuseJust a vignette sort of thing, as you said but why do I like it so much? Hm...
Water85 2008-03-28 ch 1,	abuseI liked it.. But let's see, I'm not so sure about OCs, they generally turn me off. But I definetly like your intepretation of Kenshin's pain, and the part about his past.
Crazy IchiRuki fangirl 2008-03-24 ch 3, anon.	abuseYay, you updated! And a superb chapter as usual. I love the way you depict Kenshin differently, more humanly than he was in the series. The transition stage that you picked is really hard to write, but you're pulling it off! Not the overly-polite, gentle Rurouni and not a misguided manslayer either. And I must say that Amaya's becoming more and more lovable. She's so natural, so very ordinary that my extreme prejudice against OCs just wore away. And her mother as well. In just a few lines you established her character so beautifully! Really looking forward to your next chapter.
moeru himura 2008-03-21 ch 3,	abuseAmaya has TB? Actually, to be diagnosed with TB during the late 1800s was almost sure death. Only 5-10% can be cured and not even through medicine (b/c that was yet to be discovered --1940s?) but through the person's natural immunity. So let's just hope Amaya is one of those with good immune system.:P
Blunablue 2008-03-21 ch 3,	abuseInteresting storyline. I liked, that Kenshin, although he wandered already for five years, is still pained and filled with bitterness about his past. He has obviously still way to go to change to the gentle rurouni - though he changed already in your story, he is more gentle to the girl and cares about her future. I like how you brought in Kenshins own past in the first chapter :) the reply-function doesn't work, so I thank you here for your nice comment on my fic, it made my day :) and how can you feel intimidated? your story is great! :)
RVD 2008-03-21 ch 3,	abuse'TB... Yeah, you're right about that... Curable but will need time and care for that to be successful... I guess Kenshin will have his hands full... That is of course the girl did not die before he can take her to see that magic doctor... I wonder who the hell that is...' Keep up the good work, dude... Update sooN!

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