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| Lady Montague 2008-06-26 ch 3, | abuseReally good story. I like Alice's point of view. You describe her situation very well. And I really like the poems, you used! |
| Kryptonian250 2008-03-17 ch 3, | abuseCan I suggest something. Maybe she sees her children before she gets killed by her husband. She did want to see them in the movie. |
| Kryptonian250 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThis is a pretty good story. I never read a story about the POV of Alice before. |