Reviews for It All Started At A Party

Iphigenia Black
2008-06-02
ch 2,

abuseReally like this story, I'm glad this is focusing more on James and not his siblings.

BloodMoon Wicca
2008-03-14
ch 1,

abuseSince I've decided to Review to the best of my ability... I, er, accidentally made notes *don't shoot me* So, sorry it's a long review.

-Where did they track down the Scamanders? It's good of you to drag up old family names, I've never seen anyone use that much of the book before

-Spellcheck is awesome. Two words: fidgetting and flusttered. I know they're typos, but still, use spellcheck whenever necessary. It would improve your writing style.

-'Weasley Twin trademark grin, which he had graciously inherited from his Uncle George.' How do you inherit something from an Uncle?

-I absolutely am IN LOVE with your characterizations of Mickey and James. They're so expected, but so original. I think you are good at created and maintaining your characters.

-I love how Ginny doesn't care about anything as long as Harry doesn't find out.

You use humour very well, and this is a really great fic. Will be on my Alerts for sure! Update SOON, I can't wait.

Again, sorry to put you through the longest review I've ever written. It means it's good.

~Jen

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