I love it please continue

more...need more...can't breathe...please help! hehe thanks for sharing! love xx Shezzi

Sorry it took me a while to review. Yay, Rose is finally in it! Can't wait until the next chapter.

Talia Taylor

Okay, I'm really confused.

Talia Taylor

oh BIZARRENESS...

Things are starting to fall into place...

Talia Taylor

O Hai fic...(sorry, been looking at too many LOLcats)

well written, and i liked the universe differenceness

but silly Jack...allowing potential threats home with you is one step away from keeping your Cyberwoman in the cellar...

Em x

Hi

I just read your story it's good. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

hey!

thats just mean!

update soon please

Great story.I'm guessing Tala is something to do with Rose and the Doctor.I know Tala means wolf so its got to be something connected to Bad Wolf which is or was Rose's connection or way back to the maybe thats why Tala's in Cardiff.

I don't know but i'm interested to find out the reason behind her name.

I like it, please continue

Doesn't Tala mean Wolf?

Tala Rose's daughter!

haha I'm a genius :P

her name is a big clue - tala is wolf isn't it?

Em x

Great job at keeping us guessing. It makes a better story when the reader is on edge like that.

Tala means "wolf", right? I'm thinking a Bad Wolf scenerio connecting "regular" world to "Pete's World". Is she Rose's kid, maybe?

I love stories that use Jack's team to connect people.

teenager, cocky smirk, knows jack, torchwood tee shirt... sounds like rose (and the doctors?) daughter from alternate london! well thats my guess anyways. and not sure why her name is tala yet. great story so far!