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Reviews for: 4 O'Clock
aKaKitsuneKK
2008-09-30 . chapter 1
...it's even better then the previous one...
I suffer from insomnia...and i kinda see myself in this xD
Riia Herogoochi
2008-07-20 . chapter 1
** AWESOMW YEAH IT TOTALLY RULED AND LIKE YOU BLOOD RULES TO THE END!! INSANITY IS A GIFT
ChappiIchigo
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
I Loved this one too Alice-chan!! I want to give you a preview of EBONY AND IVORY Here ya go!!

EBONY AND IVORY

Author: Riceball 101
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-xPrelude-x

Chapter One

And…So Fell Snow…
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Nobody needs me anymore.

It was snowing; petals of the purest white. The sky; looked just like a black abyss.

His back is to the wall of a (Trespassing Zone), knees drawn up to his chest, hands clenched into fists. He was clothed in a long black trench coat that reached the back of his knees, white bandages wrapped tightly around his chest, black ripped jeans complete with matching shoes. Beside him sat a wooden sword, It was clear; he was a Yanki.

The bright tangerine short, spiky, gravity-defying hair is what made him stand out the most.

“Kaa-san, I really didn’t want you to die. I didn’t…I know it’s a bit too much to ask for, but could you one day watch over me too? Will you forgive me eventually?” he whispered.

Because nobody knows me.

A glistening crystal fell into the dull landscape, it was a tear of sadness and sorrow, and then; it began to snow a bit harder. The petals of the pure white fell, melting in his untamed hair.

Nobody knows me, when I was an angel.
KivaEmber
2008-03-14 . chapter 1
Pretty good! There is implication of IchiHichi going on so ya did succeed.
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