*ahem*

Nice. Normally this pairing makes the muscle behind my eye twitch (and yet... it's like a train wreck. I refuse to look away), but this wasn't half bad. Not bad at all, in fact.

Thanks for posting it.

Not a shipper, hm? You coulda fooled me. =p

I haven't read much Firefly fanfiction, actually, this one is the first I've ever read, but it was cute.

I didn't expect to see so many fics about Jayne and River. Personally, it's a pairing I never would have expected.

Oh, and this part's incorrect: "“Get outta my head,” he had said. “You first,” she replied."

The part Jayne said and the part River said should be on separate lines. Any time one person speaks then another person speaks it should always be on a different line.

-Princess-