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Neal A. Williams
2008-03-20
ch 1, anon.
abuseI like the fact that Soap is continuing in the British Army. But I'd like to know how he somehow passed all of the ranks of Sergeant and Lieutenant. And since his squad is quietly waiting to regroup with others, why would they alert hostiles to their position by freely open fire on anyone that might walk into the area; wouldn't they only fire on someone if they were an immediate threat? Also, where are they?
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