Reviews for Final Thoughts

Digitaldreamer
2008-03-20
ch 3,

abuseAww, this was short. It was a nice fic though, it's nice to get into Jack's head. I kind of wish we had gotten more insight into what he thinks of Ryan, but that's because Ryan's my favorite character and I find the relationship between him and Jack could be terribly interesting. XD Maybe you could write one about those two next?

In the meantime, however, I did enjoy this. You have some misspellings here and there and could use more details and such, but it still wasn't bad. I enjoyed it.

~*Digitaldreamer*~

Digitaldreamer
2008-03-18
ch 2,

abuseOh, very interesting. It's nice to get a look into Jack's mind, and it's nice to see him talk back.

I do hope you update soon~!

~*Digitaldreamer*~

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