i hope this isn't over, or is it?

Lol! Plz update!

Tht fan translation is amazing! Lol

LOL thts HILARIUZ

"Woah. Pikachu, what happened to you?" asked Toon Link, who, for some reason, everyone had been ignoring until now.

("Uh...") He eyed Ness who eyed him back evilly. ("Let's just say that if a psychotic, bat-wielding midget starts chasing you, run.")

XD

Red! :o lol look! Its shigesto itoi! ..who?

LOL

"W-wait!" came Ness' voice from down the hallway. "Can't we talk about this? You've got the wrong guy! That Red is evil I tell you! EEEEEEEEEEVIIIIIL!"

I agree lol

Lol i luv marth! XD aw. Red is nicer to lucas than neeess.

"Fine, sheesh..."

("Like, hello there, Toon Link,") giggled Jigglypuff as she came over. ("Boy, you are so gonna get a makeover! You're way behind in fashion! I mean, tunics? Those went out ages ago...")

Behind him, Wolf dug his claws into his shoulder. "Hey, kid. Wanna join the Dark Side? We have cookies..."

"Uh..."

Lol!

lol! I looove the end lol

("What? It's not like he'll know...") Pikachu smiled at the DS. ("Aw, sweet! 492 Pokémon? Not bad, not bad at all! And he didn't even cheat; he traded! You, sir, have new respect from me.")

XD

This whole chapter was hilariusly epic :D

Go pancakes! Lol

("...You smell like cookies.")

"Huh?"

("Cookies. You really smell like them... Do you have any?")

He reached into his pocket and pulled out an evil cookie from the other day. "...This?"

("Aw, sweet! It's an evil cookie, too! Those are my fav! Can I have it? Please? The fat kid never feeds me anything.")

"Uh, yeah..."

He gently took it and flew off, calling out, ("Say, thanks! And that fat kid was wrong; you're not half-bad! See ya later!")

Popo hunched his shoulders stupidly. "What a twist!"

Pikachu nodded. ("...And I have absolutely nothing to add to that...")

Ness jumped up and pushed him to the ground. "YOU GUYS FREAKING SUCK! I THOUGHT I WAS SCREWED!"

Best..part...LOL

Haha xD i dnt liek da lucas bess yaoi :P

maaargaaaritaaa!

Popo laughed. "Go, man, go!"

"Hey, loser!" growled Wario. "That's my bike! Bring Margarita back! Loser stole my bike!"

Pikachu sweatdropped. ("...Your bike's named Margarita?")

"Shut up! I don't tell you how to live your life!"

XD

This was so friggin funny!:D ur 1 of my fav authors! Lolzz! :)

Lol! Hilarious lol xD MARTH! whyyy? Lol

"IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT!" suddenly barked Lucas, kicking Marth in the head, sending him straight out the window. "YOU'VE RUINED MY INNOCENCE, DAMN YOU!"

"..." Ness made a face. "Uh, way to go?"

"Has he ever done anything like that before?" asked Nana to Popo, who just shook his head. "Huh, guess it's progress."

("...Anyway, we don't have a graveyard!") said Pikachu. ("I mean, why would we? What're we gonna do about that?")

Aha xD

Best part!

And: MY EYES CAN STARE INTO YOUR SOUL! xD

Rip..schiemel

GOD DA-! STOP DIVIDING BY ZERO!

lol I loved the crackness put in this story. XD Something like what happened in the cafaterica happened to me in my school cafaterica. XD I spred something at in became complete nonsense at the end. XDXDXD

And besides, violence wasn’t the answer; it was the question, and the answer was yes!

...that's from Chapter 10, right? XD

And...jesus christ, CLONES. And I thought the originals were bad, these guys are ten times worse! ...I take it Red Lucas is the leader...and Claus-Lucas is THE only sane and nice one...WHY IS HE STUCK WITH THEM? IT MAKES ME SAD!

...yeah, late review, I know.