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| dArkliTe-sPirit 2008-08-17 ch 20,  | abuseWow, that was one of the most confusing and yet greatest chapters ever. Really, it had the return of so many characters, and the chaos was just...XD Wow. Well, at least Popo had his happy ending... P.S. The list of codes made me laugh SO hard. Ness is right... |
| MisterDrBob 2008-08-15 ch 20, | abuseGenius! I've been following this story, but I only got an account today. This is probably the best story in Smash Bros. fanfiction right now. I love your characterizations and references to memes. One question, why are you so into Lucas? |
| babyangel22 2008-08-14 ch 20, | abusehaha thats was complete nonsense lol... awesome chapter! keep going |
| HyperInuyasha 2008-08-13 ch 20, | abuseMore earlier then I expected. It was so funny! |
| TARDIS 2008-08-12 ch 8, anon. | abusegeez, HOW MANY memes have you done here? (the only one I could place was the 300 at the end) |
| Dimention 2008-08-12 ch 20, | abuseAh ha ha ha ha! Wonderful chapter! The Brawl (lol reference) was described very well, and much laughs were exhaled. Ciao! Update soon! |
| Sunflower Princess 2008-08-09 ch 19, | abuseI knew this day would come. n_n |
| dArkliTe-sPirit 2008-08-08 ch 19, | abuseHey, it's the return of Ness's 'I-can-stare-into-your-soul eyes! They haven't showed up since, when, Chapter 1? And I can't believe some of these switches! Especially Ness and Lucas. I got stared at and told to stop laughing so hard! Really, when Lucas went to shower... And Nana as Kirby...she enjoyed that just a bit too much. |
| the Leander 2008-08-07 ch 19, | abuse“I don’t think I can; you’re too sexy to overpower--” I just about died at that line. It sounds exactly like something I'd say XD (My half-brothers and I have this inside joke about Ness and Lucas being sex gods/masters of sexiness/total pimps/all of the above, and... uh, yeah.. xD; ) I loved this chapter. XD It was hysterical. I love your versions of Ness and Lucas so much, lol; they're so freaking amusing. The body swap was great! XD Keep up the awesome humor. X3 |
| Notorious-Osaka 2008-08-06 ch 19, | abuseAhahah! Another great chapter, and all I can say is thank you for making my week! Lucas-Ness made me laugh the hardest XD I hope you update soon~! -Osaka |
| TJtrack99 2008-08-06 ch 19, | abuseThis is hysterical. That is all. And yes, you did pull off the body swap nicely. I don't think I'm ever going to stop laughing... |
| ShadowBlueShane 2008-08-06 ch 19, | abuseNess and Lucas are really funny. Write more please... I'M BEGGING YOU! |
| leganos 2008-08-05 ch 19, anon. | abusePulled off perfectly, sir. One of the few fan fictions that make me laugh out loud. |
| iLike2EatPiez 2008-08-05 ch 19, | abuseYES. You did pull that off perfectly. I think I was laughing, or at least ready to laugh, every five seconds. This just keeps getting more and more random! That's a good thing... right? Poor TL, though. PS: Chocolate. Asphalt. Dumplings. FTW. |
| Dimention 2008-08-05 ch 19, | abuseYay! This was a GREAT chapter! Very clever, and I think you pulled it off really well! Ciao! Update soon! ...When will you be updating that BOA:II story? Brawl's good, but it's no GoTY. -Mauled, raped, and tortured by fanboys- |