And besides, violence wasn’t the answer; it was the question, and the answer was yes!

...that's from Chapter 10, right? XD

And...jesus christ, CLONES. And I thought the originals were bad, these guys are ten times worse! ...I take it Red Lucas is the leader...and Claus-Lucas is THE only sane and nice one...WHY IS HE STUCK WITH THEM?! IT MAKES ME SAD!

...yeah, late review, I know.

You know, it's fine. Ignore my idea. Just continue this story.

I sent you an email about it but I guess you didn't get it. Email me your email and I'll send it to you.

For a second I thought you were going to bring in the characters from Melee who got royally screwed, but that only equaled, like, 5. This turned out much funnier than I thought it would.

YAY UPDATE. c:
This new mini-arch should be awesome. I couldn't breathe at some points in the story because I was trying to keep from laughing...since I'm in the library and they kick you out for stuff like that. Great job, keep it up!

Whoo! You're back!
Great chapter. Can't wait to see how it turns out! I really loved the $00pah NiN10doh! references with the Links.
Matter of curiosity, when you wrote the last chapter, were you unaware that Marth's game was indeed just released in nice sexy English? I just got it yesterday, and I have to say, it's a lot of fun!

It's been quite some time since you updated this story! I thought you were finished with it.

Oh man... I can't believe I read all of this in little over 24 hours. I don't know if I'm more impressed by my free time or by the story, really. xD

This made me facepalm and laugh so many times, good thing nobody was around. Seriously, Schlemiel, Ness kissing Lucas in his sleep (and Lucas being so unfazed), Team AWESOME, Toon Link getting beat up, somebody finally pointing out how Lucas really lacks Flint's cowboy genes... whew, everything was hilarious. Specially everyone's screennames during the whole Family and Friends thing. And everyone's comedic portrayal is **win, specially Pikachu and his ego.

As for the last chapter, that's the best so far. Itoi and Ness, for some reason, made me go aw. I dunno, the stuff they did striked me as fraternal in a way. But even though hearing the no Mother4 thing always makes me brood, it was awesome.

Rock on~

I must say, I'm sure Nintendo doesn't know, or it would sue...SO NO ONE TELL THEM!

This was funny. Looks like it's all fun and games until a new game is promised...except for Snake and Sonic XD

So, Ness finally got revenge. Go figure, huh?

He pulled Ness over. “Hey, Ness! Do that thing with the thing and Poké and mon and the thing where the guy comes out of the thing and then he goes nfejoaeksdougsjewhuigirewh!”

He sweatdropped. “I have no idea what you just said, yet, I know what you mean.”

He blew into a whistle he got from nowhere and, about 0.38404 seconds later, a trillion million Mr. Saturns fell on all of the accused.

“AH! THEY’RE EATING OUR SPLEENS!” they cried.

(“Huh. For some reason, I was expecting that,”) said Pikachu.

Of course he was XD Chapter 5, folks. Say, those Mr. Saturns are getting slower...

Good gravy, what's this?! Awesome that's what. :)

OMG... YOU’VE BEEN TURNED INTO BED SHEETS! BY THE EVIL JAPANESE PEOPLE IN MY HEAD! NO!”

She sighed. “So pretty, that thousands of people somewhere had to become horribly disfigured just so it could be.”

XD Laughed so hard that I had to wait to catch my breath. I'm probably gonna end up saying something like it in school to. Please, keep up the awesomeness!! As an afterthought; what happened to Schlemiel?

Nice chapter. I'm dissapointed that my chapter didn't come up, but this is hilarious! Oh, and I'm at Porky in MOTHER 3! Finally!

You know, FE1, the one Marth starred in, is getting a DS remake. It's going to be called Fire Emblem: Shadow Dragon, and it will be released in English!

I actually had to STOP myself from laughing at Part 2.

My favorite lines:

He groaned. “...Fine. ...Uh, this lady’s Kumatora. She’s not a lesbian, but she acts like one.”

She frowned. “What kinda half-assed introduction is that?!

LOL! This sounds like something I would say. I didn't know Kuma was mean like that...or had pink hair...I thought it was red?
I love the way she treats everyone like a damn imbecile. How old is she, anyway?

BTW sometimes, when I'm offline, I accidentally say stuff that I read from these chapters...some of the more SANE stuff...but still, everyone thinks it's funny. If only they played Brawl...

Sorry I forgot to review. Great chapter!




Oh! My chapter idea is next! =D