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| jordinajamaica 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseWAW!! Lindsay is really brave! I love it!!:D Update soon!!:D |
| CaRiNeSs 2008-03-19 ch 2, | abuseAww... I hope he tells her! That was cute...great job :) I can't wait to see what happens next...and yes... I would love to watch the DL show too! |
| soswimmer13 2008-03-18 ch 1, | abuseangell's name is jennifer. some people on have the misguided notion its jess, but they are wrong, and imdb both list it as jennifer angell. |
| Ducky'sgirl4ever 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseA great story. I liked the part where Danny didn't want to answer the phone because it was his ex girlfriend. |
| prplerayne 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseThat is very sweet! I really like it. You're new at English?! That was pretty good for only 4 years of it so far. Ya know, I'd really like to see Danny call her back and have a real kiss, or something. |
| jordinajamaica 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI love it! I've made a version of what happened after charge of this post but I prefer yours!!LOL!! I haven't seen mistakes but I'm Spanish so English is not my first language either...:D GREAT JOB! Update soon! |
| p3karen 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI liked it!! you did a great job with it. thats one of my favorite episodes, I thought Angell’s 1st name was Jennifer come to find out its Jessica lol. we're not sure if Louie is dead they left him in a coma so hes fates still in the air. |
| pinkyzq 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseit's a good start...i like the speech he gave to lindsay about what type of woman he like...will he ask lindsay for a date before lindsay go inside her apartment? well, update soon... |
| Bec0512 2008-03-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was pretty good for you only having learned english 4 years ago, good story, looking forward to more. :) |