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| Alice4Ever 2008-07-25 ch 5,  | abuseim glad that u had the flashback that was helpful. |
| Rokkis 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abuseShort and it's been so long, that I had to reread the last chapters. Wish the chapters were somewhat longer and more detailed. Like the general idea though, but Harry and Legolas would be a great pairing. Perhaps Erestor could be considered. Elven pairing definitely, since Harry's rather long life:D Cheers! |
| Damien of the Shadows 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abuseGood, your writing is noticeably better than in the previous chapters so that's good. The only compliant I have so far is that nothing has really interesting has happened yet. You introduced harry and explained what happened, and that's about it, the trip from Bree to Rivendale despite Harry's presence is practically identical to cannon and the few interesting bits (like Weathertop) you skimmed over quite quickly. One other thing DO NOT make this Harry/Legolas! |
| Way Walker 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter! I love this stories unquieness (sorry can't spell) with Harry living for so long and his dark nature. Love it and can't wait for more. |
| 917brat 2008-07-24 ch 5, | abusehell i don't care about the fact it will not be showing the pairing and will be like you said because that too sounds good i mean Harry does need a good friend...or more to relie in and i really think Legolas can be that friend any way the story sounds real good so far so please keep it up cause i can't wait to see what happens next...oh and what does harry look like under that cloak i mean you had Hermione say somthing abouyt a glammer charm or somthing about taming the potter hair in the prequle (SP) and i just can't help but wonder what does harry look lik. |
| momocolady 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abusegood chapter |
| Firehedgehog 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abuse*kills weasly* poor harry |
| Shminzi 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abuseSome unexpected twists here and there but that's what makes this story so great! Excelent update! |
| hpswst101 2008-07-23 ch 5, | abuseI'm all for the Harry-centric filler. Update soon. hpswst101 |
| Olaf74 2008-07-23 ch 4, | abuseI'm lost of words. Your Story is more than Fantastic. Please continue it as soon as possible. |
| storm 2008-07-23 ch 4, anon. | abusei got a suggestion for folloing movie or book...see which one fits your motives better and update |
| InzanityRulz 2008-07-01 ch 4, | abuseNice chapter. Update soon. |
| honey-senpai 2008-06-25 ch 4, | abusewhy don't you just fallow the movie as most of the younger generation have seen it and a lot of the older generation probably skipped so of the more boring part of the books for example the council of the one ring in the movie is short but gets the point across while the one in the book is long winded if you ask me but that just my thoughts on the matter other then that i love this crossover my two favorite series together ^_^ |
| Yemi Hikari 2008-06-21 ch 1, | abuseObviously you've done some research even for not having read the books. But... I highly doubt that becoming immortal is as easy at that... |
| DoubleTime 2008-06-20 ch 4, | abuseO! I like this! Keep it up! |