 KawaiiKittyChan 2008-05-05 . chapter 1Yays! It's strange I never got across this one yet.. I like it.
Alucard shows his love without going out of Character.. Nice writing |
 The Puppeteer 2008-04-19 . chapter 1Well for your first piece, you're a bloody good writer. I'm impressed by that. You should write more, or turn this story into a multi-chaptered story. I'd like to find out more about the Phermones thing...and if Seras release her own to attract Al.
All in all, it's short, but it was good and I really enjoyed the scene you portrayed. I thought that vamp was pretty strong for a weakling...it would be interesting to see if there's an advanced chip. In any event, great story.
This has made my fave list. |
 S.Pendr'gon 2008-03-29 . chapter 1Very well thought out. Nicely done. Have you checked your email lately?? |
 MythStar Black Dragon 2008-03-17 . chapter 1That was very doog loved it. |
 Reality 2008-03-15 . chapter 1Mm..I see nothing that needs to be changed. You nailed their personalities spot on. Good job! ^^ |
 SemiPrecious 2008-03-14 . chapter 1 aw... Alucard and Seras fluff! -fangirl scream-
That was really sweet, I think you did a really good job with this. That pheremone stuff was cool too, and it's something I can actually see Millenium doing... I suppose it'd work a bit like Alucard's aptly named 'sex beam,' seducing people into doing what you want...
Anyway, my point is that this was well done, and I look forward to reading any more fics you decide to post!
SP |
 Translucent Darkness 2008-03-14 . chapter 1Great story! |