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| Eden Tsukimiya 2008-07-08 ch 5,  | abuseGood story so far. Added it to favourites. |
| goldchild 2008-07-03 ch 1, | abusehello i just am writing to tell you this is a great story and to ask you a few questions. one is what is this a crossoverfor and will konoha ninjas come to get naruto. update soon |
| verseus 2008-06-30 ch 1, | abuseVery good story you have here. I do believe this is the first narutoxnanoha fic I have read... Though I'm not too familiar with Toraha, it's not too hard to follow through your story...which is a good thing, of course. Though I am a bit curious as to the Hokage's reaction to Naruto's disappearance... All in all, this is a definitely good read, and I am definitely looking forward to the next chapters. Keep on writing! |
| bluedragon of the 13 2008-06-27 ch 5, | abusevery very good story. please keep it up if you would. |
| Primal Chaos 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseom just for future refernce in naruto world they do have thing like cell phones cars trains naruto moive computeres susuke retreaval construction equipment remeber wave arc and they have factoryes heck it showed naruto playing a video game on a playstaion once the reason why somthing are feudal japan in some areas is realy they are that poor or it's a personal choice like they perfer the simpler life sorry like i said just for future refernce it your story do what you want |
| Demonkid 2008-06-24 ch 5, | abusenot bad |
| Taeniaea 2008-06-24 ch 5, | abuseGreat Story!! |
| Bobboky 2008-06-24 ch 5, | abusesweet |
| Ben Dukes 2008-06-24 ch 5, anon. | abuseGlad to see this fic continued, it's to good to stop at chapter 4.Chapter 5 seems like it's laying foundations for more interesting events! Keep up the good work!! |
| bissek 2008-06-03 ch 3, | abuseI'm surprised you made Dr Ishida female. If Ishida had been male, you could have made the person the non-practicing Quincy father of Ishida Uryuu from Bleach, adding one more potential level of overkill to this equation. Unless that's Uryuu's mother. |
| Dimly 2008-05-31 ch 4, | abuseIt's a bit complicated and confusing, but really good nonetheless! I'm eager for more! :D |
| Illori 2008-05-26 ch 4, anon. | abuseHi! I really liked your story! Please please please don't abandon it, I really want to read what happens next!) |
| Taeniaea 2008-05-08 ch 4, | abusegreat story |
| Ben Dukes 2008-05-05 ch 4, anon. | abuseA friend pointed out that a full out multi-crossover may be exactly what you had planned for this story.If so (and contrary to my prior review) the best multi-crossover I've read is Bet#10 by Shade,a full tilt romp that stomps inconsistencies down through sheer momentum . If this is what your aiming for GO FOR IT! Nanoha's befriending factor might make that tricky but if you pull it off it could be awesome! |
| Megaolix 2008-05-05 ch 4, | abuseWhoa, talk about overkill... Just how much more can you add and how will you fit it all in. I'll watch out for next update. |