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| Andee88 2008-06-25 ch 26, | abuseThat was simply beautiful. The long-awaited love scene was very tasteful, and very well written. Love it! |
| Andee88 2008-06-23 ch 25, | abuseI gotta say, I really like your Jacob, you've developed him so well, and he's a real likable character. I have a question, has Catherine already been to the tunnels to see everyone? I've been looking forward to that part, and was wondering if I somehow missed that. |
| Andee88 2008-06-20 ch 24, | abuseWhat happens next?? And what did Jacob learn from Catherine? Hehe, I love this story, it just keeps getting better! |
| lwolf 2008-06-11 ch 21, anon. | abusePlease keep up with the story. You have done a great job of weaving it. Thanks |
| KikiPet 2008-06-08 ch 21, | abuseWow!! I really love it.. is it completed? Well written! K.P. |
| Vanessa 2008-06-01 ch 18, anon. | abuseVery interesting twist. Now that you have my attention, please tell me that there is more past chapter 18.. |
| Andee88 2008-05-17 ch 17, | abuseIt's so good to see Catherine's health improving, and the story of Vincent's heiritage just keeps getting more and more interesting! This chapter seemed to end a bit abruptly though. I hope you update again soon! |
| Francesca Toney 2008-05-15 ch 16, anon. | abuseDear Ms. Vetivera, Whomever inspired you to pick up from the end of the TV storyline and continue here in Fanfiction must be someone very special. In your Author's Note you say that your story ended before Chapter 16. Which would have been your last "official" chapter? As far as I am concerned, you should keep on writing endlessly. I have enjoyed it all. What other stories have you submitted? I wanted to send you a personal e-mail. I could not login and so I am saying what I would have wanted to say in the e-mail here. You said thanks to Ron Koslow and company. I say thanks to you Vetivera. Seekpathways |
| Andee88 2008-05-11 ch 16, | abuseYay! A new chapter! I was wondering about Vincent's father, I had a feeling it would be Paracelsus after all. I've been missing this story, I hope you update again soon! ~Andrea |
| lwolf 2008-04-27 ch 15, anon. | abusePlese keep writing I like your story. |
| Andee88 2008-04-23 ch 14, | abuseYay, an update! Aw, the reunion between Catherine and Jacob was so sweet. But whats this forshadow at the end about something dark on the horizon? What else could happen to poor Catherine? Looking forward to finding out, though! |
| Joanne Mayer 2008-04-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseJust wanted to write that I am loving this story and hope you plan to continue. I have read countless stories on this site and this one by far has me checking daily for the latest update. I hope you continue to write. Joanne |
| Monica Cross 2008-04-16 ch 13, anon. | abuseOMG I absolutely love this story. I cannot wait for the next update. |
| Andee88 2008-04-15 ch 13, | abuseAw! That was so sweet! *sniff* |
| Andee88 2008-04-13 ch 12, | abuseYeah, I must have channeled you that info about Florida. Haha. It's also the capitol of heat, humidity, hurricanes, bugs, and theme parks! =D This was a sweet chapter, I've never heard of version of Vincent's past like that one before. But I hope they reunite soon!! One thing though, the woman who found Vincent was named Anna Pater. =) |