Lovely. The tone of this story is very soft, and very much what I associate with the image of Akira thinking deeply. It's wonderful how you likened Go to real life, especially as, to Akira, Go /is/ his life. Everything flowed smoothly, and it was interesting to see Akira interacting with a girl in this way. A melancholy story, but not in an overly dramatic way. I liked it.

Aw... Akira... No I'm feeling all depressed and stuff.

Interesting story. Well written.

AH!
that's sad. it's like the tragic sense - no matter what you do, you can't escape a fate that's not the best. good writing :) you made the whole thing somehow detached and yet personal :)very groovy
so that was the rest of touya akira's life, huh? that was all he could amount up to? WAH!
if you hadn't decided to stop it there, i think you could've had him trying to fight hiss fate...and fate overtaking him like the true trajic...or him overcoming fate like the true fiction...
thanks for writing your story! ;)

a very deep introspective on his thoughts and I can really see him thnkig along those lines