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Reviews for: Anchored
Lucrecia LeVrai
2008-05-17 . chapter 1
I'm not a great fan of this pairing, I admit, but I really - and I mean /really/ - liked the way this fic was written.
Randomboulder
2008-04-09 . chapter 1
This was... amazing. I'm getting nostalgic here. The Alphia obsession seems so long ago.

Well, I guess true love really does know no time. Especially when true love includes sentences like: "Give him a sword and he could cut you in two in under a second, but hand him a so-called “gun” and he’d probably just end up shooting himself in the foot."

I giggled like a little girl at the thought of that.

At one point you wrote "short of shit" and "needn't not", and I feel compelled to tell you this, even though it's totally irrelevant. Darn the law that reviews must be helpful! (In which case I'm lucky you made those mistakes, because I really can't point out any flaws in your writing. Really.)

Do you have any favorite novels that you can return to, and you feel all light and comfortable and in the right place when you read them? Your writing makes me feel that way. xD Rather sentimental and silly for fanficland, but it's true.

I kind of hope your obsession rekindles itself. Perhaps it's the springtime..? Anyway, love this. ^^
Mimiru
2008-03-20 . chapter 1
Aw! That's just like Albel. =)
Inulover4eva
2008-03-19 . chapter 1
I alway loved the alphia you wrote, i'm glad to see it back, you're writing is wondrous :)
Hypocritical Mindset
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
I've always been a fan of Alphia, but hadn't been able to find any good ones; I think Sophia's voice actress scared them off.

Obviously your making this fanfic has made me extremely happy. It seemed a little rough, but I understand you haven't written these two in a while and sometimes Sohpia is just frickin' hard to write if you want to stay in character yet not seem too annoying.

Still, I really enjoyed this fanfic and the way you linked the two characters together, through a bond of isolation and lonliness. I enjoyed the bittersweet ending as well.

You're writing a lot right now, but if the Alphia muse ever strikes again, I encourage you to heed it. Seriously.

Thank you again! :D
jayanx
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
Very nice, complex and interesting.
Millenium Ring
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
Brilliant! Loved it! It's a nice idea about them both having something in common. I loved the different references to the characters you used, simply because Albel's POV is always fun to read ^-^. If you write more then I can't wait! I've been dying for another Alphia to show up!
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