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Reviews For: Two Broken Hearts

Elflady88
2008-08-20
ch 1,
abuseYou're really good at poetry. I think this arrangment fitted the poem nicely. Keep on writing:)
sickoftakenpennames
2008-06-01
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love the rhthym and mood of this poem. Very well done.
Myaa-kun
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseHey. I'm Frog-Wallet's friend.

For the first time in my life, I was actually intrigued by a poem. I'm the type of reader who rejects a poem when he sees one. However, this is an exception. Your words seem to be picked with the upmost care and they have a hidden meaning. Frog-Wallet loves that type of stuff, therefore she e-mailed me this poem.

Nice job and have a good day. I'm glad that I read this.

MK
Kaline Reine
2008-05-12
ch 1,
abuseWhat a sad, sad story. But I like it anyway. I can tell you put a lot of effort of effort into this! Your poetry has a very nice rhythm to it. It's really beautiful. I used to be such a huge fan of this pairing. But I kind of think, the pairing is what inspires us to write, but the meaning of the message that we deliver is what makes people remember us. I will read your others as soon as I get a chance!

-k.R. (Yes, the same Kaline Reine from DeviantArt, Lol) :D
Frog-Wallet
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abuseHoly frogsflyingacrossthemoon! This was so beautiful; I was crying my heart out. I used half the tissue box. My friend was asking me why I was crying and I showed her this poem... and well, she started crying too, even if she doesn't know what Naruto is... (-.-') She started showing her other friends and well, we have a brigade of crying touched peeps using their tissues. Dang, you deserve more reviews! People these days don't really pay attention to poetry... :(

This is going in my faves list! You're a really awesome writer!

~Frog-Wallet (Psycho author :p)
Wolfie559933
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseVery nice! Kinda annoying reading completely down though. I guess I just don't like poem format. -_-"'

Love the poem! ^^
els1324
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseYay~! =DD It ended happy~!!
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