I am very frustrated not because I don't like your story, infact I love it, but you haven't updated in a year. =/ I started reading it today and when I finished i felt like this is it. The ending of a great story. It's disappointing. Please do update. Take your time. But not too much time. Bye

BEST STORY AND PLOT EVER O.O UPDATE YOU, GO, NOW, WRITE!
I absolutely adore B in this story. No, scratch that, I love all characters in this story; it's incredibly realistic. Even frighteningly!
Omg, I beg you! This plot is too good to waste!! It's so amazing, I can't even put words to it!!
Please
I think that this is the first story that I've ever read, where I'd seriously cry if it wouldn't be continued. I've loved a lot of stories, but this one seriously stole my heart.

I found this story interesting. I liked how it was set out and how the characterisationwas done. I like miniscule things n the interactions that were placed.

I definitely like B, he's interesting and different. It's almost funny to see how far he'll go to get L, but it will probably back fire on him.

Good work, keep it up!

interesting story B is being kinda creepy but he was creepy to begin with and the way L is semi-stalking Raito from a coffee shop is interetsing i hope to read and review more chapters as soon as they are posted

Okay so originally I was reading ROH, and while I would still like to see that updated, I've really fallen for this story. I know you've got a lot on your plate but I really hope you prioritize this story highly because I really can't wait to read the rest. Love what you've done with the characterization in this one (B's crazy, but wonderful, and Light's just perfect). Can't wait to see what role the death note plays, and I'm really curious what L's reaction will be when he finds truth about B's new love interest. Anyway, congrats on writing a great story thus far, and I hope you update soon.

Oh my- this is by far one of the most complex plots I have ever seen in the Death Note fandom. I absolutely adore all of the twists... Raito turning down the notebook because of B's interference in his life is just priceless. Keep up the good work!

Gah! Please don't abondon this story! It's really good and interesting! :D You REALLY should update! I wanna know what happens...! -pout-

It's been a year! When are you going to update "Captivation"? There's gotta be more to the story, isn't there? ~SA

I really, really enjoy this story! You haven't update in such a long time though! I understand that you have a live but yeah. I really love the characters, I've actually read Another Note now, it was great. Now that the Death Note is here, I can't wait to see what will happen next.

I really, really like this, the idea seems wonderful. I've actually re read this many times, I've done that with a lot of your stories. I just really like your writing style. I'm hoping that you'll update soon!

I think I just might squee in fangirly joy...
But I'll try to contain myself ^-^U
Honestly, it's a bit FRUSTRATING- I really want to know L's reaction to B's... erm... 'relationship' ??
I also find B's growing... fondness(in B's own creepy, AWESOME way) of Raito incredibly entertaining(or something, I can't think of a better word right now...)

And, of course:
DeatH NotE! YES!
But wait... Oh hells... B... oh crap that's an evil cliffhanger...

B comparing Raito to a pawn made me quite happy.

Poor dear! The grounded dilemna!

Ah... and before I knew it... the chapter was over (so sad!)

"the other clad in completely white pajamas, with curly ebony tresses" I was under the impression that Near had white hair. Was I wrong? XP I'm sorry, it was just bugging me.

Oh you HAVE to continue!! It's so god!! *faves* *faves again* Oh my Kira, the way you... Like... and B! and L! And Raito! *kya~*

You have to update, like.. REALLY FAST!! Like.. REALLY REALLY fast! xD

Please, I really need the story! Cause... I'm bored too...

... And I don't have B or L... So I'm starved.(if you know what I mean...)

Well, uh.. Update!

I don't know if I've reviewed yet but caught this story second time around reading it, can't wait for more!