Reviews for A Seed's Growth

Reviews For: A Seed's Growth

junebride 2008-06-15 ch 12,	abusejust an fyi if you're looking to be correct with detail (always nice in fan fiction) - Stacey's parents are called Maureen and Ed. They are also divorced. I dont want to sound mean but i have to agree with some of the other reviewers that this doesnt really seem to be so much a fan fiction for bsc- the only thing remotely similar is the fact there is a character named stacey.
Visual Dichotomy 2008-06-13 ch 10,	abuseI am NO EXPERT, but a few notes: -overall very natural dialogue -a few strange technical points here and there -consistent and distinctive character voices -some exciting medical impossibilities (as noted, and also with near-instant blood test results) -moderate tense weirdness at the beginning, but maybe I am missing something -detail adds to the feel of the story, but perhaps you need to be more selective in including it -more about setting would be nice (description of locations, especially places where entire scenes take place) -if you want to get technical, alright isn't actaully a word -strong and consistent pacing Overall, well-written fiction. =)
Veni Yan Cari 2008-05-21 ch 10,	abuseYou might want to consider actually naming the chapters after the month or month of pregnancy Stacey's in - it gets confusing otherwise. Besides that, great story, I look forward to the update.
happyhorseback 2008-05-09 ch 7,	abuseI am really injouying the story. What about having stacey's mom come to see the baby born?
happyhorseback 2008-04-14 ch 6,	abuseI am really injoying the story. I am learning about the baby being borne. I hope that the baby gets to be borne.
daydream-believr 2008-03-25 ch 5,	abuseI like this story and it's great that you're updating frequently. It definitely has potential and is very well-written and clear. The only thing I've noticed is that you have a lot of run-on sentences in the story. It's not a bad thing, but it's a little odd to have these sentences that never seem to end. Try plopping some periods into the sentences, especially the ones that are a three- or four-line paragraph made up of just one sentence. The story sounds a little breathless right now, to be honest, with the run-on sentences and I think it would really help slow down the pace of reading if they were a little shorter. Other than that... I like this story! Keep up the good work! ~Lizzy
RyanStiles4Me 2008-03-25 ch 5,	abuseNot a bad chapter, although I'm not sure it'd be good for diabetic Stacey to eat cream puffs even if the doc did recommend she eat more. :)
CrypticCalico 2008-03-23 ch 4,	abuseThis is getting interesting...update soon! -C.C. :)
Rachel D Sucks 2008-03-22 ch 4,	abuseJust a little note: It seems like Stacey's only a bit over 2 months along in this chapter, as you say chapter 3 is 2 months later than when she found out about her pregnancy and this chapter is one week after that. You won't be able to tell the gender of the baby that early. Most OBGYNs and ultrasound techs won't even attempt to make a guess until about 16 weeks at the earliest, 20 weeks more realistically. They may try to see if they can see anything at around 12 weeks, but most tell you right off that they probably won't be able to tell (mine couldn't). If your research told you otherwise, I'm sorry. I'm just going off of personal experience and what my OBGYN and ultrasound tech told me.
RyanStiles4Me 2008-03-21 ch 4,	abuseI have to agree with the above reviewer that this isn't really a fanfic because there's very little to do with the BSC. And this chapter was very boring; unless it's going to come into play I don't really care that Stacey gets backaches from writing on the blackboard or isn't getting quite enough sleep.
blackflame28 2008-03-21 ch 4,	abuseI don't want to seem mean, but how is this a BSC story and not an original? the only similarties i see is that there is a character named Stacey. Are you planning to bring in the other girls? Give some back story? Why is this a fanfic?
the epitome of randomness 2008-03-15 ch 2,	abuseGood start, i like the idea of Stacey not wanting kids.
MissMeg377 2008-03-15 ch 2,	abusehmm...this story could have a lot of potential..depnds on the track it goes on as it comes along
blackflame28 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abusethis is... interesting. i will reserve judgment until you have posted more of the story before reviewing and detailing my opinion further.

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