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| x.Who.Dares.Wins.x 2008-04-01 ch 3,  | abuseHey great chapter! please update soon!! please! =^.^= |
| kat priestley 2008-03-26 ch 3, | abuseReally good so far (love harry potter pals btw!!)... Hope you UD soon |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abuseThat was nice and fun, it's ok to have chapters like that! I'd suggest not putting A/Ns in the middle of your work as it interrupts the flow of your writing. Try just putting them all at the end :) Really good though, keep it up! Elle xx |
| emmalea21 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abuseI'm a really terrible cook too but I've never turned scrambled eggs RED. How odd. Any way, doesn't matter about the chapter; it's good to have a break and a sort of "set-the-scene" chapter every now and then. |
| ChristinaAngel 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abuseRed scrambled eggs? Cool! They should have chalked it up as an experience! My brothers have watched Potter Puppet Pals so much that they can now recite it word for word. Which they do often which means I can recite it word for word. Joy! Anyway nice normal chapter and hopefully action's going to start soon! |
| spinkle22 2008-03-24 ch 2, | abuseHey, good chapter. I'm glad Li's finally come clean... it's not like her to be so depressed! Update soon :P |
| TotalyBookworm 2008-03-22 ch 2, | abuseHey i'm lovin the story line so far... except the fact that Amber and Hex have barely gotten together! please please put more of them in i'm beggin ya! |
| x.Who.Dares.Wins.x 2008-03-21 ch 2, | abusehey! your story is great! well done, and its got Li Paulo in it! Fabulous! but you still have to carry on reading mine! ^-^ |
| emmalea21 2008-03-17 ch 2, | abuseI liked this chapter. Nice to have a break from action and such. Very glad that Li has trusted Paulo and told him about her grandfather. I feel so sorry for her... |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-16 ch 2, | abuseThat was good, it's nice to have some non-action stuff in AF! think you did it really well...I'd offer to beta but I'm already doing it for two people so sorry! Can't wait to read more! Elle xx |
| kat priestley 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseInteresting idea... liked the bit with alex/paulo in the pool - hehehe. Hope you Ud soon |
| emmalea21 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseGood start! Sounds interesting and can't wait for more. |
| Elledreamer 2008-03-15 ch 1, | abuseHey good start, interesting idea too! Don't worry about mistakes but you could try finding a beta if you want. I really like this! I can't wait to find out what's going to happen! Elle xx |