Reviews for Dark Messiah, Book one: Elements

Reviews For: Dark Messiah, Book one: Elements

Thomas Blaine 2008-08-01 ch 11,	abuseCool! Please update a little sooner next time (cheacking on your story has been one of my first things to do in the morning this past month) I really love how the story is progressing, and the interactions between Xana and Leanne was somthing i missed in the game. I cant comprehend why you dont get more reviews, cause you deserve far more credit than i can give you. Well too bad, just know that your story is highly praised by me and a lot of my friends. Please update soon!
Thomas Blaine 2008-07-19 ch 10,	abuseThis is incredible! (fav story, fav author,) You've really done a good work with the characters, and besides some minor insignificant misspellings, the story is fabulously written. Though i don't think Xana is a succubus in the original game... Definitely a demon of some kind, but not a succubus. Never mind that, i seriously love the scene in the bath, its fantastic to perfection. Please update soon, we need some good Dark Messiah fictions about.
Thunder1 2008-07-15 ch 10,	abuseFor a while there I wasn't sure if you still were written this. I am glad to see that you are. good job on the chapter nice length. A foul hydra huh? Sounds like trouble. can't wait to see what happens next.
Alex 2008-07-10 ch 9, anon.	abuseWell the story is very good,actually is great! But untill i see the final part(btw, when is going to be placed on internet?)i wont say anything else So go to work and finish the story! :P Best of all, AleX
Elias Dae 2008-06-06 ch 1,	abuseAn interesting fic. Keep it up!
Arvel 2008-06-03 ch 9,	abuseOh my... A Dark Messiah story? Not only that, but what appears to be the only Dark Messiah story on the site is a good one too? What are the odds? At any rate, this story has been really interesting so far and I certainly intend to keep an eye on it for updates. The fact that you've essentially reworked the majority of the Dark Messiah plot seems to have actually been a good thing so far. The world you've been building in this story has more depth, races, and politics than the one in the game. I have no experience with the other Might & Magic games so if you've blended Dark Messiah with others I have no way of knowing but, regardless of origin, the end result is that it works. This story looks like it's heading in a Sareth/Xana direction as far as relationships go, which I find highly relieving. I don't know why, but personally I really couldn't stand the original Leanna. Xana made it oh so fun for me to be bad. The Xana in your story is quite different than what we saw in Dark Messiah, but I still find her character to be far more enjoyable than Leanna's, even if she doesn't seem to be as 'evil' or manipulative as the original. Blech, there's probably a lot more I could cover in this review but I'm tired and have to wake up for a class in six hours. So, I'm afraid this will have to do for now. Till next chapter then.
bob rijke 2008-06-03 ch 9, anon.	abusewell i should have reviewed before but i realy do like this story had too take a few chapter too realy get into it but loving it so far the none standerdness of this story if a blast too and you making this world come alive, and thats very hard. love all the little an not so little sub-plots can`t wait too see whats going too happen next. sareth going uber, xana doing her thing, lethos going letal or maybe even havez blowing stuff up
Hitsuiro Issa 2008-05-13 ch 8,	abuseYush~! Once again I must thank you for updating Dark Messiah- sorry I couldn't review it earlier, things were a little busy around here. x_x So anyway, I see a nice relationship between Sareth and Xana; Sareth's a little shy though, and I think Xana's a bit straightforward. Like it that way? Haha. xD Where's Leanna...? Anyway, I like the way you made Lethos. He's so cute now~ And this line: "We’re a delightfully despicable people. In war we poison and murder our enemies and during peace we poison and murder each other." LMAO. How truthful and cute! xDD As always, great job on the two new chappies. I've had fun reading them, and I'll let you know that it's worth the pain of waiting. Haha. Till next time then, Cheerio! Hitsu.
Thunder1 2008-05-08 ch 8,	abuseGreat chapter
Thunder1 2008-04-30 ch 7,	abuseOMG! a Dark Messiah fic. you must keep going it is a moral imperative... why I don't really know but I do know that I really want to read a dark Messiah fic and I like what I gave seen so far so keep going.
Hitsuiro Issa 2008-04-05 ch 5,	abuseOMG YOU UPDATED! --strangles you I thought I had to wait long, so thanks for the relief! :3 I must hug you first for updating for me! --huggles Once again, awesome job. I really like your writing style. Maybe I'd make a fanart based on your story- I really like Xana, I think she's cute. xDD And Sareth. LOL. Do you know that I named my white cat after him? Oh! THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR INCLUDING RAELAG. You cannot imagine how much I appreciate you for this. The more the reason I won't stop bombarding you with my love and reviews for your awesome stories. xDD Does it contain spoilers? I don't really care, i have a feeling I won't be playing any of the expansion sets soon enough. T^T And I must know what happened. PM me if you must. I shall huggle you more.
Hitsuiro Issa 2008-03-29 ch 2,	abuseOMG A FELLOW HOMM V ADDICT AT LAST! First of all, I shall bombard you with immense 'thank yous' and hugs for writing a story for this game. I mean, it's rare for me to find another writer of HOMM V! So I must glomp you and stay close...we shall be good friends. >D Anyway, I like how you write. The style is great! You make it clear to people what had happened and what would, etc. I am truly a fan, so please don't get freaked out by my review. xDD It wouldn't hurt to reply too. :3 Aah, and please update. I want to know what happened to Sareth and everyone else. xDD How I wish I had the expansion sets...curse these infernal stockage of this city! RAGH!

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