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Magical Frying Pan of Wonde... 2008-04-05 ch 2,	abuseThis came out of nowhere. Seriously. You must have been really bored or something and decided to write something. It was good, but it wasn't your best. Probably because there was no plot. Well, there is a plot; sheena makes friends and skips school. Awesome. Sounds like a rip-roraing adventure. and yes this is sheelloyd. it's sheelloyd in disguise, even from you. that's just how dangerous your writing is. A wonderbread store. I wonder what they sell there. And why are all your main characters such bitch friends. They're bitches and friendly. Is that your trademark? Keep working on this, but don't be like 'grr gotta finish this no time to eat must write' or something.
Daughter of the Storm 2008-04-04 ch 2,	abuseI'm glad you decided to continue it! I personally don't care about the pairings (but Shelloyd is cute), so type away! Storm
The Sage of Spirits 2008-04-01 ch 2,	abuseNo Shelloyd, eh? That has no concern for me - I'm not that big on Shelloyd anyway. I'll read it, but you'll never see me write it. ... "no Kratos" - T-T When I saw the name Irving I knew Kratos wasn't around... T-T Well, you do as you like - you're running the show. "probably no Mithos" -Well, if there is no Kratos there should be no Mithos. Good Luck. SoS
Daughter of the Storm 2008-03-21 ch 1,	abuseHuh... Could it be before Sheena bacame a ninja perhaps, when her parents died? I dunno. My brain has a sugar shortage at the moment. It gave me some much needed angst, too much sweetness lately. Thanks! Storm
The Sage of Spirits 2008-03-15 ch 1,	abuseWell, all I know is that it deals with Sheena. Everything else is a complete blank. But it's very angsty. Good Luck. SoS

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