hey, well done with this one! its really well written, and there's hardely any mistakes, with any of it! which is more than i can say for 15/16ths of the stories on here

anyways, i luv the plot line, but i think there should have been more of an intial attraction between emi and hiro, maybe exagerate a reaction from him?

anyways, keep writing and update soon!

OMG IM AN IDIOT!! I DIDNT NOTICE YUU HAD CHAPTER 2 UP. I THOUGHTI THERE WAS ONLY ONE CHAPPIE. UGH! WRITEMORE@!

WRITEMOREWRITEMOREWRITEMORE! PLEASE? PLEASE? SOON?

I love your story and hope you can write more soon. I was so happy I finally found one story that wasn't about tally, twilight/uglies, or some random person set before uglies!:D

update soon please!

Cool story!
Just one thing, though...is there going to be, you know, an issue or an important event happening in the story? I mean, if it just revolves around the character and their regular lives everyday, than it would be sort of boring, you know? I also think that Emi shouldn't have met Aya. I mean, you know, it's a step closer to making the character a Mary-Sue, and I certainly wouldn't want that to happen. It would be more interesting if they met, oh I don't know, maybe a made-up character that was in the top 10? Or maybe the 16th most famous person? *shrug* Just saying.
Otherwise, I think that you should continue the story.
(Sorry if you do not like annonymous reviewers. I don't wanna make an account, though, since to me it would be taking up space if I were not to post a story on my account at all.)

Look! I found you here in misc.books. It was quite a surprise. It would've been much easier to find you if you were under the Uglies catagory. Just do me and the uglies lovers (and yourself) a favor and relocate yourself to the Uglies catagory.
Thank You

yayy update soon :]
i love uglies :]

Pretty good so far. I can't wait until you post the next chapter!

whoa! I love this. Please update quickly for your new little fan!
-jazz

I just finished Extras, and LOVED it, and therefore I'm so happy to see a fanfic based off it. I also really like Hiro :D Your characters are great so far! Keep going!

~i
Faith

Aww...please continue soon, I like your fic!