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| lizardmomma 2008-07-08 ch 29,  | abusevery good job, I liked the speech. |
| laura 2008-07-08 ch 29, anon. | abusesequel, sequel, sequel seriously get started lik NOW! |
| Emm 2008-07-07 ch 29, anon. | abuseOH MY GOD THAT WAS WONDERFUL IT WAS A GREAT WAY TO END THIS STORY AND BEGIN THE NEXT! KEEP WRITING! AND YOU ROCK! EMHEARTS! |
| jazmingirl 2008-07-07 ch 30, | abuseplease keep writing its amasing im 100 hook up with your story |
| Lientjuhh 2008-07-07 ch 30, | abuseWell this a little bit of the sequel, I just might like it... Well done.. ;) |
| Lientjuhh 2008-07-07 ch 29, | abuseI like it... I don't know if I will be liking the sequel, but this story is great... Well done... ;) |
| TwilightTeen 2008-07-07 ch 29, | abuseAwesome I would love a sequel! |
| TwilightLover4Eva 2008-07-07 ch 29, | abuseWOW! I love thiss! I miss chris on charmed and only watch the episodes he in. SEQUEL PLEASE! |
| hermit hideaway 2008-07-07 ch 29, | abuseOoh... cliffhanger. Well with all the kids and the powers running around in that family I'm sure Gideon will be vanquished in two seconds flat. Anyway, great story and if you do decide to write a sequel, I'm sure it will be great. |
| xXStephRheaXx 2008-07-07 ch 29, | abuseI love you're story. The plot and the characters are amazing and well thought out. It's as if its the actual charmed series-only better. The only thing I have to complain about is some spelling errors but apart from that, fantastic! * |
| Ms-Fleur 2008-07-07 ch 29, | abuseGreat ending, it was great to see everyone enjoying themselves and for once not worry about demons. Damn, cliffie, so Gideon is back, I hope the next generation can stop him, I see time travel involved in the sequel. Not sure about the ideals, but maybe it can start of, with the Halliwells leading thier lives, they may get demons once in a while, but they noticed large group of demons attacking, maybe some of the Halliwells are even killed, Wyatt may turn evil, or go down the wrong path to save his family again, time travel can come in with a twist. I don't know, grasping at straws here, but I know the sequel will be awesome. |
| lizardmomma 2008-07-07 ch 28, | abuseVERY good job, I really like how you had everything get resolved. |
| Lientjuhh 2008-07-07 ch 28, | abuseGreat chapter... Leo headmaster of magic school... I like it... Well done.. ;) Bianca alive.. Great... ;) |
| Ms-Fleur 2008-07-07 ch 28, | abuseThat was a very sweet cute chapter. I think it was good you made the chapter, it was nice to have a hcapter without violence and demons. I liked how all the kids interacted with thier moms, it was very cute. Bianca coming back was a surprise, good to see bianca reunited with Chris and Pip. Can't wait for the next chapter and see how the future is like. |
| hermit hideaway 2008-07-07 ch 28, | abuseThat would have been a good spot to end as it was a great chapter. I'm all up for a sequel too if you want to make one. Great job. |