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| Luigi021992 2008-05-09 ch 10,  | abuseI mean no disrespect in saying this chapter is the most disapointing I like the real Mario not the Mario who uses guns and cussess out Bowser I like the real Mario as one who jumps on people and hurtles Bowser a half a mile and I dislike the Simpsons as a bias by me I just would like to suggest to keep it in the real Mario land as I enjoy books like that. |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-09 ch 10, | abuseGood chapter! Keep up the good work! ~Later & Out! |
| Smileyfax 2008-05-09 ch 10, | abuseThis was a true darling of a fic, and I can't wait to see this future endeavour. |
| James Birdsong 2008-05-08 ch 10, anon. | abuseCool |
| James Birdsong 2008-05-08 ch 9, anon. | abuseGreat |
| James Birdsong 2008-05-08 ch 8, anon. | abuseQuite simply wonderful |
| Nicktendo Squad 2008-05-08 ch 9, | abuseOhh Mario's gonna get ** at the next chapter. UPDATE SOON!! |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 9, | abuseNO! DARH...**... Uh...Good chapter. Hurry! Update! Will ya! |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 8, | abuseThat BASTARD, I knew it was another scheme to rule the Mushroom Kingdom...Uh...Or maybe...I'm just speaking a little too fast, before time. |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 7, | abuseThis chapter was kinda short for my taste, but...WHAT?!? Hm...Inresting... |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 6, | abuseDAMMIT! Now you made Mario make some sense...How do she know if he's just misleading her...Uh...I don't even know anymore! Why do YOU always have to end in a cliffy? ...Wait...There's three more chapters I haven't read yet? Why didn't ya tell me! Good, like always! |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 5, | abuseO...Was this his plan the WHOLE time! Maybe...Probably...Huh?...Eh, I'll just read the next chapter...sigh... |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 4, | abuseSweet ending! Mario better hurry, Bowser slowly seducing her! Kidding! |
| Twanny Bizzle 2008-05-08 ch 2, | abuseO! That was harsh! Bowser totally burnt her **...With the truth! Nice story. I'm gonna read the rest now! ~Later & Out |
| Smileyfax 2008-05-08 ch 9, | abuseA rabbi, eh? I would have figured Bowser to be a Kooptic Christian. Good stuff, keep it up! |