Fantastic. Well done. I really loved the last sentence. :)

Great story - thanks for writing!

OH that last line was too sweet! *very very naughty snicker* Yummy in it's extremeness *snicker, giggle snort*

*sigh* I do so love it when they get their act together.

oh yeah! First on the list being can you lock us back in together?

Oh so very yummy and tantalizing!

*runs off to read then next chapter*

Great story! I loved it! The Doctor and Rose belong together!

wow, thank you. Loved it, write more please, LOL

'maybe we could send him a video'

naughty doctor ]

that was nice, magnificent job

Loved the story!

this was really good. i liked everything about it. no suggestions on what to improve. it couldn't be better in my opinion.

Princess Bride reference rules! Loved the chapter by the way. Great update!

Hey that was great I liked it.

Maria

Beautiful. Brilliant.

Clever, naughty, wicked Time Lord. Loved that, that was brilliant, and inspired and stuff. Dare I say fantastic?

And the final scene was simply beautiful. Elegant and exquisite and erotic.

Plus, I loved the movie reference. "As you wish" indeed.

Such an elegant response to simple lines. Loved it!

Okay, so, why isn't the next chaper already posted?

:) Very nice; more, please.

Whoa that planet is my new best friend

Maria

EK! LOVE IT!

Aw, fantastic, really, it's splendid, and I can't help but wonder why that fancy Time Lord physiology didn't catch on... or, more to the point, if that fancy Time Lord physiology is succumbing to that or to something else.

*grin*

Brilliant, I love it, it's fantastic, can't wait for the rest.

Thank you!