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replacement
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseRoxas you insensitive bastard! T_T The poor redhead...
Bond of Flames
2008-03-16
ch 1,
abuseAw, this was sad.D: Sad but good. I liked it. Nice job.
Kirah Ruth
2008-03-15
ch 1,
abuseKirah: Aw, poor Axel.
Ruth: This is cool. And you deserve reviews.
Kirah: I'm terribly depressed about my own little collection of drabbles not getting reviews (from anyone except my two best friends, and my sister) do I decided to review someone else's. And I chose well! Yay.
Ruth: You know what would make the ending better, though? A comma. "I'm sorry, Axel." That would just make the ending more powerful. ...I love commas.
Kirah: We have had extended love affairs with commas, semicolons, italicized letter, and other various form of punctuation. We're... very odd like that. One of us is probably going to grow up to be an English teacher. Or both, how weird would that be? Twin English teachers.
Ruth: ...We're leaving now. Really. BUT WE LIKED THE DRABBLE!
Kirah: ...*In a small voice* Could you read mine? Please? Pleasepleaseplease? If I give you /really/ big puppy eyes?
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