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Reviews for: Explosions in the Sky
Bipolar Panda
2008-08-22 . chapter 1
Woot! Another wonderful, well-thought out story from the great EJ! XD I was so..tempted to read it since it has one of my favorite instrumental bands as the title. It's so touching...I don't know. It impacts my heart :] I hope Corea is going well for you. You're coming back in 3 days!

"She tries to explain to him, struggling to find the words that describe her elation when Tyki dances with her, just as -- if not more -- graceful, her heart soaring in appreciation when Tyki presents her with fresh flowers, beautiful art, and her tremor when he speaks, his beautiful intonation sending song through her being."

That's my favorite line. It's ONE long line. It's as if you're trying to portray that she's so into Tyki, your favorite sadistic D-grayman character! Hehe
AGENT Kuma-chan
2008-06-18 . chapter 1
D'AW...

(I finally got around to reading D.Grayman.)

(and I like the ending. And how Tyki was just trying to hurt her.
..and everything.)

*SQUEALS*
NakiatheSilentOne
2008-05-24 . chapter 1
You never cease to amaze me. This is so well-written. The imagery blew my mind. Please keep up the good work!
allurement
2008-04-08 . chapter 1
I adored this. Lenalee's innocence and naivete, Tyki's allure, Kanda's presence, everything.

This isn't very long, yet somehow, you managed to explain why and how Lenalee fell for Tyki, how and why Kanda felt the way he did.

This was a breath of fresh air for me, because I don't venture into the DGM fandom very often, but today I did, and after one hour of being bombared with bad!fic, I had almost given up hope. Until I read this. So thank you, so, so much for writing this.

Seriously, though. I LOVE your Tyki, and there's no doubt I would have fallen for him too. People like that are dangerous.
shilhouette68
2008-03-31 . chapter 1
That was a hell of awesomeness and candy. Seriously. The best fic I've read all week! :D Your writing style is so captivating and descriptive; that's just ♥. Keep writing, I really enjoyed this!
Momosportif
2008-03-18 . chapter 1
This made me cry. I honestly cried (perhaps listening to an angsty song at the same time helped...). I was so intrigued by the pairing that I had to read it and I'm so glad I did. Your writing is amazingly beautiful. You remind me of another author that I adore who writes for Naruto primarily and often does things like divide the fic into segments headed by names like you did here. But at the same time you have your own flare so don't be insulted by the comparison! You're both very unique writers!
I loved this, I really can't think of any more eloquent way to say it. Your characterizations were flawless and beautiful and so painfully in character. Kanda stood out to me because I (and other people too, I think) forget his rougher side and make him more elegant than he really is. I could have read this from the manga, honestly. I also loved Tyki...it was perfect. I mean perfect. I love the way you describe things too. It's not "Tyki has one hell of a smexy jawline" it's "the mold of his jaw defies all imperfection". Hell yes it does! *dies the death of a Tyki fangirl*
And the way the title tied in. I love you so much I hate you! I'm always so jealous of people who can work in teh title without it being the last line *is guilty, guilty, guilty of that last statement!*
And it's a drabble. What more could I want? And I answer myself: nothing. In the words of Shakira (don't hate me!) "Baby, this is perfection." If I could favorite something more than once, I would spend all day favoriting this.
And I've been thinking about Tyki dancing for a long time...Fate that I found this? ;3 Thank you for the amazing fic. *bows*
Forgotten Alice
2008-03-17 . chapter 1
ah..this is just plain lovey. you make Kanda seem extremely humane, you rock at fluff. i liked the last portion the best ^^
Annie Sparklecakes
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
Kanda is such a romantic.

This was amazing. My favorite thing about your writing is how you reveal everything slowly, subtly, but so everyone just gets it. It's not something a lot of people can do.

And, um, I kind of love your Kanda. A lot.
AGENT KELL
2008-03-16 . chapter 1
*gasps*
evil, evil tyki.
and well, both of them are hot.
that i cannot deny.

geez, i wonder who i love more.
:D

Ja!
`IC-chan
Ribs On The Run
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
How angtsy... had me sutting in my seat rigid for the whole story.

Short, and sort of fragmented, imagery like a montage of memories. I liked it. It was good.
AGENT SAMMY
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
HEY EJ. I LOVE YOU. LOVE ME AS WELL, YES?

Missa has already said it, but this Kanda is so amazing and wonderful.

'When she feels the pieces of her heart being pulled back together, it's because Kanda is taking painstaking care in picking all of them up and gluing them together.' Ngh. So beautiful, I wanna squish a Kanda now.

And Tyki is so sinister, but I still love him in this. That's just how amazing this is.

I loved it, your talent defies every other power I have, EJ.
iMissa
2008-03-15 . chapter 1
When she eats, it's because Kanda has taken the time to make whole meals and occasionally, they slurp soba together. When she studies, it's because Kanda has asked her about some calculus problems, coaxing her to get back into the subjects she has learned to love. When she sleeps without nightmares, it's because she's seen Kanda leaning against the doorway, watching her -- protecting her. When she dances, it's because Kanda has brusquely grasped her wrists and pulls her to him, gruffly asking her to oblige him in a dance to raspy radio music in the corner.

When she feels the pieces of her heart being pulled back together, it's because Kanda is taking painstaking care in picking all of them up and gluing them together.

HOMFG. KANDA, I LOVE YOU. ASDFGHJKL;

HI. SO UHM, THIS IS SO MUCH BETTER THAN MY KANDA, AND IWOULDLIKETOHAVEYOURBRAINKTHNXBAI.

(I'm sleeping with this under my pillow xD.)

But, seriously EJ, it was LOVE, and so completely amazing. GREAT job, babe!
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