Quite the thought-provoking one-shot I must say. I like the insight, really, I just like the way you view the characters. Makes them all seem far more real and human. Nicely done.

this seems more like when hes in coma after he gives up the black materia...am i right...? and really as i look at this...it could be used for sephy as well...with some slight modifications.

Its about time you started writing again...'Home' is one of my favorites and i would like to see it continued...

Although i cant not feel sorry for whatever it is that happened to you when your quote 'life fell apart'. Im glad to see you getting over it