I'm a little disturbed right now..how old was she when this was made?

Hmm, pretty good, Antonio Prohais would be proud. Should've been in one of the Comics

Aww, are you sure you're not my big brother? What you have described seems to be the exact same thing he and I would do in the same situation: him locking me in the closet, me demanding he post a dumbb fandom, yadda, yadda. Anyway, the story is, as you said, cute, as well as... well, accurate, to the point, and without useless information, horrible grammar, or terrible punctuation, which drives me crazy. I'll give it a 5 out of 5 stars, and take an extra 'bravo' for the kid. Tell her Lady Grey Spy said so.

Great job! I wish I could see it in comice form.

(Good. I see you killed that white wanker I don't like him either)

My little brother wrote this review, so don't complain to me :D

Rube Goldberg would appreciate the cunning involved in the execution of this plan of execution. Camouflage, applied geometry, misdirection - this has it al-most. Just needs the second chapter where in Black doesn't see the Burmese tiger trap which White had painted its thin covering white and had placed arrows in the bottom by shooting them backward into the bottom of the pit.

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Tell your sister she accurately grasps the concept!

I think this would make a very acceptable Spy vs. Spy comic.

That is pretty adorable! Your sister's a good writer. She should get an account, I'd read her work!

cute! definitely sounds like a strip MAD would do

Cute story; I can imagine this as something that MAD would do. Sweet of you to post this for your little sister.

Uhh...Wasn't that bad...cute...viloincey but cute. lol

Quite a clever ruse! Those Spy vs. Spy guys have great imagination!

Hehe. That *is* pretty cute.

How old is she?

Yep, I can definitely imagine this happening. With MAD, not even the law of physics are safe.