Reviews for Pokémon: The Journey

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Juptile 2007-07-16 ch 5,	abuseStarting reading your story from your posting on the forums. This story is going quite well, and I'm impressed in how you've merged the games and the anime. I see you also changed the minimum starting age - something that would be reasonable in a realistic situation (why did the games establish it at 10, anyway?). Looking forward to reading more material.
Cody Greene 2007-01-25 ch 28,	abuseSo far i have read all the way up to chapter 20, i know it says i a reviewing ch. 28 but thats wrong. But back to the Review. So far i like it. It was a little slow in the beginning yes but you have picked it up quite a bit. But here is a list of what i like so far. 1. Character Progression Wonderful, making a good beleivable Character is my down fall so i aplaud you for that. 2. I like how you dont throw in Team Rocket evey chanmce you get like they do on the show. In my opinion TR gets Anoying way to quickly. But you use them sparingly. 3. Alot of other stuff not coming to mind at the moment. Dislikes. 1. Your battles are lazy. Really lazy. You start off Godd but then end with crap. 2. I don't think your characters should have so many pokemon each. With to many pokemon their is never a chance to build a relationship with all of them. That is why Ash from the T.V show doent have very many pokemon. Because they need him to be able to build a good strong relationship with all of them. 3.When capturing a pokemon you should probally write out the battle between the two. Much like you did when Matt caught the caterpie. That one was good. Instead of soing it the lazy way and just saying "While on their way through Mt. Moon they ran into a flock of Zubat, and they mangaed to Catch one." In my opinion that is a bit lazy on your part. 4. This just may not be my style but Come on Articuno. And she didnt even cath it herself. You shouldnt have gone that way. That just may be me being picky though. 5. One last thing. Nurse Joy giving him 4 pokemon for no real reson. Lazier. One i would think is fine, but 4. This is just my opinion. Take it as you will. Just remember there is more good than bad in the story. I do like and i intend to continue reading. Just thought you would like my opinion. Im not sure how much i said was legit or or me being picky. P.S. Lizzie should actually earn her own badges. Lazy again
Onion Man Chive 2006-06-12 ch 1,	abuseSo far so good. I love your intense attention to detail as well as your good use of dialogue. The story is easy to read and keeps the reader interested. You have thus far impressed Onion Man Chive, be proud!
Hoopmasta14 2006-03-27 ch 1,	abuseOMG BEST POKE FIC IN THE WORLD hava a nice day KUI
Jodi McLaughlin 2004-05-25 ch 33, anon.	abuse* I never thought I could love a Pokemon character more than I love MAy. But Lizzie has proven that I was wrong. The author of this story displays a true passion for writing and even more for Pokemon.
Riku 2004-03-16 ch 3, anon.	abuseThis is an excelant story. I think it's really cool you wrote a squel when you don't have many review. But for sure it's a good story!
Arsenal 2003-08-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseOkay while I am not exactly into Pokemon anymore as I don't have a gameboy advanced and for another I never much cared for the show because Ash is an idiot I did enjoy reading this so far. I am acctually very suprised you are even continuing this story seeing as how you have not gotten many reviews I find that very admirable Good job.
Tom Gyllhamn 2003-07-27 ch 33, anon.	abuseI suddenly realized that I hadn't reviewed chapter 33, so here it is... Áwesome chapter (as usual) and very smart ending... Can't you write another sequel... Make it a trilogy, please? Anyway, thanks for your review... And I noticed how few reviews you have recieved on this story... Shame on those who're not reading this... Great! Awesome! Spectacular!
COUGH 2003-07-25 ch 33,	abuseReally great fanfic. The storyline is really good, and refreshing. Hopefully you'll make a sequel or write more.
michael 2003-07-10 ch 33, anon.	abusea truly awesome and inspiring story
TG-91 2003-06-06 ch 33,	abuseWell, what can I say? It's a terrific fanfiction, and the sequel is even better. I will continue to enjoy your fiction, and please, write more about Matt! In fact, I'm currently working on my own Pokémon fanfic, and be sure to check it out when I upload it. Keep up the good work!
Raziel DarkFire 2003-06-03 ch 4, anon.	abusethis is a great fic ! keep it goin man it rocks!
Poseidon3 2003-03-16 ch 1,	abuseHey! This story is great! I've read all the other chapters, and I copied them down onto my computer. We all need a good Pokemon story once in a while.
Sean Mills 2001-12-04 ch 4, anon.	abuseOkay, I've started to read your story. I've only finished chapter 4, and so far it's just a copy of the TV show, only with Squirtle instead of Pikachu. But eh, hope it gets better man. Good writing though, weird with the present tense past tense deally going on.
Sapphire Mists 2001-11-16 ch 2, anon.	abuseGood chap

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