Wow. I must say that this is definitely my favorite fan fiction ever. I'm extremely impressed at how you managed to convey such a powerful message, with a common setting, make that setting unique, without much dialouge, in under eight hundred words. I'm astounded! I'm completely blown away. I can only hope that someday, with practice, I may be as able as are you.

And I also loved how you took a common Zutara ENDING and sort of... wove it into something completely different. If that makes sense. Thank you for writing that, it was CERTAINLY a relief after all the cliches!

*Claps furiously* Woot! Woot! Nice one! Loved the POV being from a third party. The ending was really nicely done.

i had to read the last line 2 times b4 i got it but when i did that was the best.

loved it

mm I'm quiet curious as to how they got out...

The ending is priceless. Loved it.

Crap. Now it's gonna bug me...

*adding to my C2*

HOW THE HECK DID THEY GET OUT?

Ooh, I like the ending. I wonder how the two escape. Hm...how did they escape?

aww, that was really good, very well written, though you're not really supposed to use the word 'you' referring to the audience, but it was a really nice story :)

awesome one-shot _

i loved all the fighting

between Katara and Zuko

nice job :)