 unluckyteddybear13 2009-11-30 . chapter 12legasp i loved the story and never would have thought that envy is ed's halfbrother! make more! plz i need it! |
 YamiTenshiKoi 2009-11-07 . chapter 12Ah I read all of this story today and I am captivated! Please continue or I may just die. This story has made me cry more times than any other so far... And that is saying something, seeing as I have read 100s of stories. Great fanfic anyways ^.^ |
 edwardsgirl16 2009-02-08 . chapter 12Please make another chapter! It was an awesome story! ^_^ |
 Narutolovesme2 2009-01-19 . chapter 12oh suspense filler! update soon k. |
 KatrinaEagle 2008-12-01 . chapter 12OMFG!!
Cliffy! Dun dun dun...
And I think that Roy is MEAN!! ><
And the anime did Envy no justice. No justice at all. HE'S A NICE GUY-er homonculus. The point is, he isn't so bad!! ><
Snap out of it, Ed!!
...This is kinda sick, you know?
But I find myself liking it...
Omg this is wrong... |
 Ria442 2008-11-22 . chapter 12NEAT STORY! Ed just wants to be (censored for the young minded.) I don't know why I said that since I am young. XD I don't care about how old I am but this story ROCKS!! update when you can. |
 Jedi Master Evenstar 2008-10-22 . chapter 12yay! finally an update! my day doesn't suck now!
great chapter, but i have one question. in an earlier chapter, you had said that Havoc was in Liore, but Roy was going to get Havoc to stay with Ed. Does that mean Havoc's back? sorry, i'm just a little confused.
update soon! i want to see the outcome of this cliffie!
~Master E. |
 mrawgirl09 2008-10-22 . chapter 12holy ** this is updating again? I hope it doesn't stop again for a long time... Woah. |
 Something Dysfunctional 2008-10-21 . chapter 12AND THE TABLES HAVE TURNED!
Oh, who knew that about Envy?!
-Dun dun dun...-
LOVED this chapter.
Very yummeh.
XD
Can't WAIT for the next one!
-SD |
 Something Dysfunctional 2008-09-24 . chapter 11-opens mouth then shuts it-
I... I think I died and went to RoyxEd heaven.
WOW!
Just... wow! It was awesome!
Excellent work!
-SD |
 Zenna Jahan Skyfyre 2008-07-17 . chapter 11yay roy isnt a bastard! |
 Zenna Jahan Skyfyre 2008-07-17 . chapter 8wtf is going on? |
 Zenna Jahan Skyfyre 2008-07-17 . chapter 5make him an un-bastard! |
 Zenna Jahan Skyfyre 2008-07-17 . chapter 3thats no fair! roys not allowed to be a bastard... ok he is. but not to ed! |
 yumie-darkness123 2008-07-09 . chapter 11wow. lol
good chapter |