I totally loved this! Its so going into my favorites list! :D

Great story, light hearted and full of great content, this story really caught my eye when I first read it and is still one of my more read fics.

wow great story this i my favourite story cause its short and to the point you should read *im not in love with you* its a great story by little falcon =p

Best AU of NaruSaku I've seen!

Oh my...
How could you be unsatisfied with this?! It was amazing
and even though I don't like that much NaruSaku fics I can tell you this was awesome! You are a great writer, never let anyone, including you, tell you otherwise. You should know that a lot of people love your fics. So don't think you're bad at this ^^
Trust me, you are a great writer ^^

-Hikari Hina

Oh! Oh my god! That was such a beautiful NaruSaku fic!

I'm incredibly Amazed by how I was able to recognize the canon characters in the way you made the two interact! Although it was in an AU setting, the two were just so much themselves, something that's sometimes hard to convey in AU settings. When reading the fic, I could practically see the parallel to the evolution of their relationship in the manga. So awesome!

Naruto is Such a sweetheart with his goofie attitude! It'd be just like him to shower Sakura with gifts, I think (though he was probably too poor to do so in the manga XD ). And yet he does not insist if he thinks Sakura-chan dislikes it, aww, so considerate. But he tries so hard!

And I love how this fic is written in Sakura's POV. The manga follows Naruto's POV more, but in the manga, Sakura didn't know at first all the hardships that Naruto went through. By placing it in an AU setting, you did a good job of portraying the annoyance that Sakura had probably also felt at first in the manga, the annoyance that many people badmouthed her for at first when honestly, how could she have known?

But I loved how the relationship between the two slowly evolved. The way Sakura came to respect Naruto's work attitude and starts to warm up to his goofie attitude? Just like in the manga! It's like reading Part I and the beginning of part II all over again. And the way Naruto acts like a goofball to cheer up Sakura-chan? So much like him! It's so sweet! It may seem like an obnoxious method but it worked didn't it? (too bad Naruto's a Bit too focused on Sasuke in the manga. But after waking up from Kyuubi 4-tails mode, he acted like that goofball alright! :D )

But the way Naruto resigned himself to the fact that Sakura will never like him... that's also so much like the manga. :'( (or at least my interpretation of it). He will do anything for her happiness, even let her go. He still acts like his goofie self, but no longer insists on the matter, because he respects her feelings more than his own.

But Sakura's feelings for him Have changed, and the ending was so incredibly sweet. Naruto's clueless again, but it's easy to see why: Sakura has been acting like she always did. How is he supposed to guess? I felt a bit like crying at how much hurt he was concealing at the fact that his love was unrequited, but Sakura returned his feelings after all. It's so sweet. *sniff* I hope the manga goes in that direction as well. :'D

Very sweet.Please write a sequel or something!

nice story. just to let you know the naruto and sakura pairing goes together well than sasuke and sakura. sasuke is too much like a wall.

This is a good story. Please make some more. Naruto and Sakura forever.

That was great!

Woah. Nice Metaphor XD Pretty Naru/Saku to me.

wow ur first? i wouldnt have known, dis story wuz actually unique cuz of the supermodel point of view u did a great job i really liked dis story

you know, you may have been unsatisfied with this story, but i wasn't. rundown sentences? that's something im not familiar with. care to explain a bit? maybe it'll help with future writing

Hahaha, knowing the fics you have written so far, I bet the singer Sasuke dated was Hinata! Nice!!
This was actually really good. I like this pairing, but I don't read many NaruSaku fics... This was great ^^

Aw...that was my first Naru-Saku fanfic! Great job! I just might get addicted, thanks to you! ^^

Write more stories!