 Ell4 2009-11-21 . chapter 1Fantastic! I love ranma and akane fanfics. I wish this could have actually happened in the manga/anime. Anyway awesome job! ^_^ |
 Shadowalker666 2009-09-17 . chapter 1A very good story, keep writing them. |
 bluewitch 2008-06-22 . chapter 1 nice... cute! |
 rhiannexxx 2008-03-25 . chapter 1this is my comment..
u made a good job!
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i like it so much! |
 Saviek 2008-03-24 . chapter 1Haha this is cute and has a cute start. It seems though it jumps from Ranma being in Nerima, than to where Akane is. In between you should have Ranma thinking of flying over, and show all the "work" he did. Ukyo would probably follow, and so have Ranma tell her not to follow. These are just ideas. Its cute though, and keep it up :D! |
 PPMKatie 2008-03-18 . chapter 1That was massive amounts of fun!! Congrats on a great story! |
 Cookys 'n' Creem 2008-03-17 . chapter 1Great story. Loved it! I fave, I fave! XD |
 Ravenskc 2008-03-17 . chapter 1I LOVED IT! |
 Ikerana 2008-03-17 . chapter 1That was great. I loved it! My favorite part..Ranma's letter LOL so sweet but also so...him!
Keep up the great work, I really enjoy your writting and looking forward to new stories! |
 Cuteziangel 2008-03-17 . chapter 1I really liked this story! Short but sweet, a very good combination! You wrapped it up very well in the last few sentences too, which was nice. The way Ranma acted so nonchalant when Akane ran into him made me LOL too, such a perfect Ranma response ;) |
 Kyoumi 2008-03-16 . chapter 1Very, very good. I loved it. I can't say anything to make it better. Just... GOOD. :) |
 O'Donoghue 2008-03-16 . chapter 1Great play of emotions and keeping them IC instead of suddenly becoming different people because of admittance. |
 rockergirl 2008-03-16 . chapter 1 YES! You wrote a new story! This is so wonderful! I love it so much! Keep writing 'cause you got major talent! |
 You ROCK harder 2008-03-16 . chapter 1Aww, that was mushy-sweet! It's funny how absence really does make the heart realize how stupid you've been for far too long, this story captures that feeling perfectly! |
 Pattie6485 2008-03-16 . chapter 1aw. Aw. AW. AW! I loveloveloveloved it! Lorerom, you have a fanfic writing GIFT! All your fanfics RULE and I loved this one! !! GREAT JOB! |