 TroubledFred 2009-03-04 . chapter 7This is a great story, Please update soon! |
 lovegaara4ever 2008-09-19 . chapter 7oh no sakura got napped! (a.k.a "kidnapped:) ^-^ :0
will team 7 be able to save her?!
omg needs to know this stuff in the next chapter!! ;D
*hint hint* ha ha lol jk! |
 cRaZyGuRl093 2008-09-07 . chapter 7Awesome story...
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Poor Sakura getting kidnapped...
I hope Team 7 & Sasuke find her before Itachi does something to her...besides the whole kidnapping her bit...
What does he want her for anyways? |
 KurenaiBara-chan 2008-09-06 . chapter 7please update soon! =] |
 AGENT Kuma-chan 2008-07-12 . chapter 6^-^
Well...just double check some of your punctuation, and why didn't Naruto chase after Sakura? He is much faster...
(Sasuke, that is commonly known as concern and care) |
 sasukelover4ever159 2008-07-11 . chapter 3really really good! |
 TroubledFred 2008-06-15 . chapter 5Despite your A/N I thought your fight scenes were pretty good. I cant wait for the next part! |
 lovegaara4ever 2008-06-15 . chapter 5oh sasuke and naruto are fighting madara!
i wonder whts going to happen...
I guess the only way i'll find out is if you:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! lol ;D
cool chapter, and the fight scenes were good! :] |
 AGENT Kuma-chan 2008-06-15 . chapter 5Oh, the fight scene isn't THAT bad.
(Sakura hurting Itachi that much,though, was odd. And considering how they are trying to capture Sakura, it is odd that they keep mentioning that they are trying to kill her...)
AND UH...SASUKE SHOULD BE CAREFUL. AND MADARA IS THIS UNSTOPPABLE GOD AT THIS MOMENT.
(I wonder how you shall get past that)
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(And now, back to studying) |
 Universal Fighter 2008-05-15 . chapter 4no flame from me, hun...
i liked the chapter and LOVED the fact that sakura isn't "swooning" over sasuke.
plz update soon!! |
 xFlawed Imperfectionx 2008-05-14 . chapter 4Ooh, finally a good SasuSaku! I can't wait for the next chapter!! |
 lovegaara4ever 2008-05-14 . chapter 4Great chapter! ;D
CANT WAIT FOR NEXT ONE! |
 AGENT Kuma-chan 2008-05-14 . chapter 4Don't worry about not updating soon (Seriously, this is WAY faster than I and other authors do. (SCHOOL! CURSES!)).
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AND WE PASSED THE MILESTONE. HUZZAH!
Sakura isn't having fake smiles and all that...(AND KAI? OMG. HE SEEMS SO ADORABLE, AND HE'S DYING.)
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And you kept Sasuke mostly in character. (His compliments are perfect.) |
 lovegaara4ever 2008-05-14 . chapter 3WHOOT! lol very cool chapter!! ;D |
 cherryblossominbloom 2008-05-05 . chapter 3I loved it! And I think the flashback would make a great story, as long as there is some sasukexsakura! |