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Reviews For: Fury of a Goddess

WedgePalmer
2008-06-08
ch 6,
abuseYay! Loving it! Keep it coming and I'll keep reading :3

Oh and I noticed that having Khazaar in her mind must be like having a third consience:

Good- voice of Piety
Evil- voice of Cruelty
Khazaar- Voice of reason
WedgePalmer
2008-06-03
ch 3,
abuseFINALLY! Took ya long enough! I love your story, and it's getting better by the chapter, Authenti. You're a skilled writer and I look forward to your next chapter! (please don't let Khazaar die!)
WedgePalmer
2008-05-27
ch 2,
abuseW00t horse creature!
I love the idea, and I hope that you update soon!
Oh and my creature in the game is a 100% good horse,(unicorn!) and he's called Wedge Jr :)

Anyway, good luck with future stories!
FoxLuvr
2008-05-10
ch 2,
abuseNice!

I love this game... and I HATE the first vortex. I always end up stocking up supplies for DAYS in real life, and then I take it through and it takes HOURS to put everything through. Stupid resource scarcity...

ANYWAYS! I love the story! Keep it up! ^.^
Smut Empress
2008-03-28
ch 1,
abuseThis is a cute idea :3
So far I think your story is a good one, and I hope to see more fairly soon. ;D
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