I've finished reading your fic... it was great... i think you really did great... oh.. and Ino really is the ice breaker in your story... and Hinata's really cool... you should make a sequel on Pain's plan.. i knew it! this Ayumi was his toy too...keep it up.. and i'm excited for you NaruHina fic...
oh by the way... about your disclainer.. if i were you, i should have written.."i don't own Naruto coz if i do, Sakura has long been dead.." lol.. well, good luck om your naruhina fic.. i'll be waiting for that... and your titles by the way form an acrostic.. TRES MARIAS... Noticed it during the thisrd chapter.. heheh... way to go! Nejiten..Naruhina and a gist of Shikatema!

Ha ha nice.

All in all, I have to say that this is a well written story. The flow is continuous, giving off a gradual revelation to the plot. Speaking of the plot, I was expecting a "hard-get" situation for the part of Tenten and Neji, but it was fine.

It was annoying to think that Ayumi was also behind of the attacks. What a poser. She deserved what she received from Pain.

Kudos for this good story :D

Oh, am I included with your game of "finding out something neat about your title?" >:3

It's...over?!?!!?
No-o-o-o-o-o-o-o-o! It's not supposed to be over!! Not with an ending like that!
T_T
Sequel?? Please??
T_T T_T
*Gives you TEN BAGS OF SKITTLES AND STARBURSTS*
May you have a sugary explosion*

we...more pleaase...im sohapy wite now...:3

okay i gotta say you should change the female parts because kunoichi and shinobi are equal and kunoichi can be strong too...your degrading women so far at least

Okay.. so:
1) Neji's there
2) He sees his girfriend on the ground, half-dead and bleeding all over the place.
3) He's probably **.
Results:
The S.h.i.t is about-eth to hitt-eth the fan...ith
Oh yes, Neji is about to kick some maijor a$$!!
Please update soon!
*Gives you EIGHT jars of cookies*
UPDATE! >:O

Oh my God, UPDATE!! I can't wait to read more!

Ha! Good timing. Good thing she survived that one!

Nice story! Couldn't wait to read more :3

Those girls are really persistent.

wow they put up a fight

oohh...interesting...
cliffie...

updatey!hey,it rhymes!

Ja Ne!

i love your story it is really good you captured hinata's personality wonderfully i love how you made each of your charaters interact but what i don't understand is why you refered to tsunade in so many names