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| csidle122333 2008-05-13 ch 5,  | abuseKeegan you know I love you storys but this is by far of your best I think that maybe something should happen in the end were Greg's grandparent's find out that greg and Sara aren't really engaged like something to do with Sara being pregnant I think it will be quit fitting with this whole pregnancy epademic going around lately anyway you don't have to use it It's your story and it's just an Idea anyway lots of love. Sara Young |
| gilgrissomlover 2008-05-11 ch 5, | abuseI LOVE this story! It's SO funny! :P I just wish it didn't end at 7 chapters! I'm so scared that you're going to have on of the grandparents catch Gris + Sara together, or something like that. So... if you do that, can you do it in a way that's not over the top? OH! And I think it would be REALLY funny if Greg disobeyed Grissom's rules and... I don't know... you probably can come up with something! :P I loved the part in this chapter with Gris giving Nick that "punishment"!! :P And if you don't mind... I would LOVE a sneak peak! :D |
| GSR'er 2008-05-09 ch 5, | abuseI just found this story and I'm loving it! I can't wait to see how you have Nana find out the truth. Just don't rush it, this is too fun! |
| Flo1804 2008-05-08 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter ! If I were Grissom, I'd have killed Greg several times...this guy doesn't know when to stop...must be hell for Grissom but so funny for us to read ! Best line "Being the boss man rocked sometimes"...jealous Grissom = hot hot hot :-) |
| Hooleo 2008-05-05 ch 5, | abuseWell, as always, your stories are great and so much fun to read. I don't know if I'm overstepping but I kind of felt Grissom and Sara's PDAs were out of character for them. I have to admit though it's fun thinking about them kissing - great mental picture. |
| toothchick 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseI loved the line (& what it entailed): Grissom glared before walking out of the room. Being the boss man rocked sometimes… |
| julie.weag 2008-05-04 ch 5, anon. | abuseI can so see this happening. I think you capture their characters very well - and I love Nana and Papa Olaf. Thanks for the great story. |
| KyliedaRock 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuselol! Love the end bit with Nicky! ;) I am liking this story more and more and cna't wait to see what you have for us next! ^^ Greg is just so adorable in this! xx |
| 22114 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseHi! I just got back from the mountains and HAD to review! You know I'm enjoying it! I'm enjoying it as much as Greg seems to enjoy krumkaker! I can't wait to see how it turns out, and I'm so excited to see what happens next... :) Hope you're having a good weekend! Greetings from your Norwegian "deep throat". |
| inlovewithgsr 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseGreat chapter! I love a jealous Grissom. |
| tiana3826 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseI like it, it's so different from most everything else. I have to admit though, Greg is way annoying! haha If I were Sara or Grissom, I would have killed him multiple times by now! |
| WalkerTRngr 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseThis story is hysterical! |
| leahsgramma 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuseThis story ROCKS! Can't wait to read the next chapter. |
| leahsgramma 2008-05-04 ch 1, | abuseGreat story. Can't wait to read more |
| theyHAUNTme 2008-05-04 ch 5, | abuse:D So cute! Greg is totally abusing his powers as a "fiance" and Grissom's gonna kill him if he doesn't knock it off!:) Excellent chapter...please update ASAP! |