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| stagedoxy 2008-05-18 ch 3,  | abuseThis is certainly interesting! I'll be awaiting an update to see where this goes! xox |
| CrayolaxSmiles 2008-03-25 ch 2, | abuseI like this very much, dear. :)I'm curious to see where you go with this! Post more soon? x |
| imaginationrunsfree 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseNot bad, not bad. You have some grammer issues and your might want to revise your tenses, but otherwise good! |
| sundrynotes 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseHey, not bad for your first! I like the idea, everyone seems to be under the illusion that life would be absolutely dandy after the concert, so I'm glad this is realistic. Keep it up! Maybe you could work on some grammar problems, but all in all it's pretty good. -H |
| Poisoned Injun Rose 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuser u gonna keep writing on this? its really good and i wanna hear more! |
| CrayolaxSmiles 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuseAw, love, this is really cute! Did you say you were from Austria? You're writing's actually quite good, especially when you take that into consideration. Have you ever considered getting a beta reader, to help you with your grammar & such? I hope to see more from you soon! x |