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yogos
2008-07-14
ch 6, anon.
abuseU MUST CONTINUE! ITS SO GOD!
auburn-haired-sadist-XD
2008-07-05
ch 6,
abuseI think you should have Brenda explain to Kevin what happened to her about the whole Assassin's Creed world and what-not. And have Altair freak out more about our world. XD Ya gotta admit, it's pretty weird compared to theirs. XDD

Can't wait for the next one!
auburn-haired-sadist-XD
2008-07-05
ch 3,
abuseOMIGOD! I do that too! The spinning in circles thing, I mean; what else am I supposed to do? ;-D
auburn-haired-sadist-XD
2008-07-05
ch 1,
abuseYES! A SEQUEL! *squeels* I can't believe how long it took me to find this!

Aww, poor Rubiks cube...*grins*

And you're right, they didn't take a lot of baths back then. Once a month is actually a lot for them. So he WAS pretty clean. ;-)
lonelyassassin
2008-07-03
ch 6, anon.
abuseYou should keep going. Great humour, and it's original. Please update. *Takes out hidden blade*
The Silent Hero
2008-06-13
ch 6,
abuse...Awsomeness. This story rules.
Georgasaurus
2008-06-10
ch 6,
abuseI really do like this story. For a start, the humour is actually funny, unlike most fictions I read that claim to be a parody.

However, your spelling and grammar does fall flat from time to time, but than can be fixed if you take care when writing.

[“Fine, be that way.” I muttered angrily.]

The full stop between way and I should be a comma. I know you know this, as it's usually correct throughout the fiction. As I said, take care when writing, and read through your work a few times before posting. As for spelling, do you use Microsoft Word, or have a seperate spell check program? If not, when you upload a document, there is a spell check in the 'edit document' part which you can use. It's not the best spell checker in the world, but it's better than nothing.

Georgasaurus.
xXJust Fly A KiteXx
2008-06-03
ch 6, anon.
abuseWoo! Woo!

How is AC for the DS?

:]
Hedwig the MillenniumOwl
2008-06-02
ch 6,
abuseLmao nice- yay for inspiration! =D How's the DS game? I heard it wasn't the best, at least plot wise, but my sister has a DS I can use and I'm sure she wouldn't mind playing it either, I just don't want to buy something I may hate @_@
Muahaha, Altair stalks her >D Well he's used to stalking, spying, and killing people so I wouldn't be surprised.
THE CHERRY BLOSSOMS ARE COMING, AND THEY'RE GOING TO EAT MY TORTILLAS! RAWWR.
Hehe, Naruto abridged awesomeness.

Ooh getting a passport- when I got mine it actually wasn't that bad, but I suppose that's because of where I got it done *shrugs*
I wonder what Altair will think about someone pointing those weird pass port cameras at him xD
(Altair jumped onto the photographer, hidden blade inches from her/his neck.
"What are you doing!?"
"*points* She/He was trying to kill me.")

Paranoid much? XD

Glad you got inspired =D

~Hedwig
Lady Snowstorm
2008-06-02
ch 6,
abuseyay another chapter.It was a sweet one I laughed at Altair stalking her and some other stuff keep going plz\




Lady Snowstorm
MeliZxAltair
2008-06-01
ch 6,
abuseYay, you continued! Thank you so much! :)

And we all now; No evil can penetrade the pureness of the LOVE, for our marvelous game! ;P
BrokenHeartAlchemist
2008-06-01
ch 6,
abusePLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ DONT DELETE THIS!

i cant tell you how much i love this story!

(hyper altair had me howling so loud my brother, who was blaring his music OUTSIDE, busted into my room, looking like he was gonna shoot someone with his airsoft gun, and demanded whoever was in here and trying to rape me to come out of hiding... then he read the chapter and was rolling on the floor just like i was moments ago... which then made his 9 friends come in in the same manner he did, only to do an anime fall after reading the chap... ah good times ^^)

so plz plz plz... cant u just keep it on hold for a while until you get inspiration back? trust me it doesnt disappear for too terribly long. someday u might be looking on youtube and find this great assassins creed amv and think 'god damn do i luv this game' and you'll get into it again and suddenly have the urge to write about it in a new chapter from this story you'll remember you made... then you'll realise that you deleted it and you'll be all sad and emo...

so yea.. for your 'future' sake and all your readers, plz dont get rid of your story...
the-lights-there
2008-05-30
ch 6,
abuseYou noob... how could you not have love for assassins creed still? I do and i've had it since christmas, along with all the resident evils (save for umbrella chronicles), all the silent hills AND avatar!! Your heart can not HANDLE all that awsomeness! BOW DOWN and keep going! TU Y ES PRESQUE! (Please)
abcdinoman
2008-05-18
ch 6,
abuseplease dont delete his story. it's AWESOME!
Bree
2008-05-10
ch 6, anon.
abuseyea i know u probably hate me but im gonna do this anyway
if u want to delete the story its ur choice. i vote KH2 personally i'd like to see you annoy the hell out of axel and the rest of them. xD any way the story is pretty cool either way. you're a really good writer, better than i've ever tried to be.
do whatever story you want!
-bree
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