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| shadow thief wolf 2008-06-09 ch 15, | abuseNice chapters! Great job. I loved the last line by Jonathon, haha. |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-31 ch 15, | abusehaha I liked that 'well it could have been worse' lol. Good chapter! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-28 ch 14, | abuseHI! Great chapter! I laughed at the arguments between the two and at Wendell's swearing. oh btw you spelt Awkward wrong, you spelt it 'akward' Just letting you know. until next chapter or until I talk to you again... |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-26 ch 13, | abuseWHOoP! Nicey nice chapter! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-22 ch 12, | abuse:D Great chapter! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-14 ch 11, | abusehaha, YAY! NEW CHAPTER! I hope mary croaks soon, she's annoying. |
| Dawn Catcher 2008-05-13 ch 10, | abuseReally good! I can't wait for more!^^ Update soon. |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-05-08 ch 10, | abuseOh NO! Wait, are they a figment of her imagination? what about Jonathon? what happened to him? |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-05-03 ch 9, | abuseNice chapter. Update soon! |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-04-07 ch 9, | abuseAw crap, the kids are giving me a guilty conchance! |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-04-04 ch 8, | abuseNice chapter. I like the plot twist with "the mother" and I can't wait to see how this all turns out! Update soon |
| Dawn Catcher 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuseWow. Pretty good! Can't wait to see what happens next!^^ |
| Cheeto Flavored Love 2008-04-01 ch 8, | abuseEvil mommy, Evil Mommy, Evil Mommy! Jonathon's stupid for leaving kate. haha Keep up the good work and update soon!! =D |
| shadow thief wolf 2008-03-31 ch 7, | abuseGreat chapters! Sorry for not reading it sooner. Great cliffhanger. Update soon! |
| Dawn Catcher 2008-03-26 ch 7, | abuseNice cliff hanger! Can't wait to read more!^^ Update soon! |