please come back and update :)

You stopped?? i would LOVE to read more but...yeah. again loved it.

aww im hooked i love this story

Cant wait for more.

good job

Cute. You should spell check, though.

that wasnt a chapter. it was a freekin paragraph. go and read an actul book and c that chapters r a hell of a lot longer. if u cant think of anythink to write then ur obviously not a writer so just quit coz ur crap.

GOOD JOB

I really like your story. I just wish that your chapters were a little longer. Keep up the good work.

I DONT LIKE CLIFFHANGERS SO IF I WAS U I WRITE MORE !

cought! Please update soon!

this story is a little weird. It's interesting how you've done something so different from anything out there.

Hey just for future reference, there is actually a forum for this type of stuff on the gilmore girls forum. It's called "looking for a story, but can't find it" pretty self-explanatory. Anyways, you probably already knew this, but oh well. Just thought i would let you know, it might work, its worked for me. Well yeah thats about it. Sorry i don't know what story that is though, btw, but i hope you find out. You should post the title on your next chapters when/if you find it, it sounds interesting. Good luck on your search.

DO NOT post questions, announcements, etc. as chapters--and especially don't to it for a whole bunch of stories at one time.

You've been reported.

I really really really like this. Please continue :)