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| Kriti 2008-07-31 ch 1, anon. | abusethat was so great!u have to have to have to write a sequal pl.!or cont.it from here...this story could really go on..it has great potential n i like ur writing style!pl.think about it...i loved this one! |
| xXxGhostingxXxKissxXx 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseReally good maybe you could write something after it? |
| Rat 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseThat was really awesome, the best OFC I've read in a long time. And the end was perfect. I like how Dean reacted to her, and to leaving. |
| ukfan101 2008-03-17 ch 1, | abuseI really enjoyed that story..well written, thanks for sharing |
| Deanaholic1 2008-03-16 ch 1, | abuserealy really really really really awesome start so far:) |